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July 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really like this fic...just a couple problems. First...the chapters are a little short. Second...it needs updating. I'm a huge fan of Kurama, whether it's Yoko or otherwise. Hell, take 75 off of my pen name and you have my YYH rpc/oc. And I created her to be paired with Kurama in rp's. So it's rare I find an OC that I approve of a pairing with Kurama with. But this...is one of those times. PLZ update soon!!!!!!!
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April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good story line , please please continure soon.
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April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Umm I don't know if Inuyasha would act like that and I certainly don't think Atsuko (Yusuke's mom) would either. I believe she was 14 or 15 when she had Yusuke. I would advise a little more read up on the characters that's all. Space out your paragraphs, too.
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April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh and one more thing PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE don't make her a Mary Sue. Meaning she won't be utlra super unbelievably powerful, the canon characters won't ALL fall for her, but unfortunately she had a tragic life with the "no acceptance anywhere bit", so you can't change that, but just be very careful. She's close to Mary Sue zone.
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April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The Spirit is the Reikai. The three worlds are Makai, Reikai and Ningenkai.
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April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Joukai is heaven, but it's not mentioned in the manga or anime. ;P