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yay its updated!!! i luv this story i've been waiting to see what happened to hiei and now i know and woo its not over!!...ok i'm done now... please continue i can't wait for more

The last two chapters were really awesome. I'm so glad that Kurama is getting better and Hiei has his sight back. Very good. YAY. HEHE, funny that Keiko and Yusuke tricked Kurama and Hiei like that to help them out. But what are friends for, ne? Can't wait for more.

Wow! It's about time that you updated! I though that something had happened to you!(something like you falling off the face of the earth) Well, I'm glad that you did update, and with a very big bang! You definiately made up for not updating for (approximatly) a month! Great job with the spelling/grammer. I only read this cahpter once but I don't think that you had any extremely noticeable mistakes. I'll look it over again, but you have gotten amazing with that! As for becoming a writer, I think that you should give it a shot, but no, I don't think it would be a great idea to only live off of that one thing. If you do become a writer and you have a book published, you have to tell me the title so that I can go out and buy it first!(even if I have to sit outside the book store for the whoile nioght before!XD) Well, good luck with everything and it's very nice to know that you are still with us! See ya!

Very happy you updated this,thought for a while you were just going to let it go(glad I was wrong on that one)Yeah ,they were a tiny bit occ on this yet I think they had a right to be with everything going on with them.You did well with that in being they were in charter in front of the others.Just a thought on you writting a book on your own:why not use a sitution you would find here but use your own people (rough drafting it) and than maybe you'd find your own voice in what you want to write.Good luck with it in any form though,its not an easy business to get into. The lemon was great yet nondescript,and I can only be glad you gave Hiei back his sight for what ever you have up your sleeve now.After all Intaro still has to make another appearance,maybe the reat of the team needs to be brought in on this sooner to ............maybe..anyway I hope you update soon.... :)

The only thing better than reconciliation is topping it off with a yummy lemon. I'm so glad there's more to this I just love it. Update soon.

Dont tell me that this was the final chapter... wait you said its not!
I am happy to read more, I loved this one it has allot emotion into it.

That was such a beautiful chapter! I absolutely loved it, especially the part about the cat (cats are so cute! ^_^). Please update soon!
Sincerely Mea ^_^

Hey great chapter I'm glad you updated. It was great to read. On the writing thing I know how it is... well kinda. I hope my reading will take me far. It usually takes me a couple of weeks to update on my fics on ff.net but on a book it takes me three months to write. *Shrugs* Anyway. Later. Botan

Regarding gramar checkers....that would require MS to do something intelligent, like hire people who have training in English...Geeks, while wonderful at programming, do not, generally, know proper grammar. You need a nerd for that

Regarding blood flow...yeah...I can relate....I've said some pretty stupid....errrr...never mind

Regarding this chapter (what you really wanted to hear, I'm sure ;D ), I'm so happy they worked things out, even if it did take Yusuke and Keiko manipulating them a bit. I'm so happy for them :D Poor Hiei, never been horny before...lol And Yays for him getting his sight back! That is just the icing on the cake :D I love your lemons :D Now, for my own ice cream :D lol

Wow, I am SO loving chapter 30. Not only was there a lemon (yea for lemons!) but Hiei got his sight back. Great writing - I love how Hiei was irritable and surly because he was horny, but he didn't know that that was the cause. You made my Monday night.