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by mhmartini

person Sil
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You´re so mean!! i can´t believe you just got kurama kidnaped!After all that Hiei want through! and they were just so happy! well, i really hope hiei or kurama just kill intaro really soon!! And that nothing too terrible happens kurama, he has suffered enough! please, update soon, i wanna know!!
person comicfancat
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yea!! you updated(big smile :) and wow what a chapter it was. Did I see the end of that chapter coming.... oh yes,things were going to nicely,somehow he had to be there watching didn't he.? Anyway,hopefully Hiei and company can get there before anything not fixable happens to poor Kurama.It was a small shock and nice surprise to have him pay off his moms home(wish I could do that for mine)I sit here wondering how his stepdad is going to handle that bit of news.I hope real life gives you a breather for a little while and you can relax.(fingers crossed)
Nicely done and can't wait to see what the next chapter brings
person yuyugirl4ever(Not signed in again)
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YOU JUST HAD TO GO AND DO THAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU KILLED KURAMA. I am so crying now! I shuddered with every word I read and I swear a tear fell for each one too! I thought I was pretty good a cliff hangers, but damn girl you take the cake! Please hurry and update soon! I got to know what happens next!! Especially when the team finds out Koenma knew where Kurama was from practiaclly the begining. It's not going to be pretty! I hope he gets his godling butt kicked! I also hope Hiei doesn't go completely insane with this. Nothing, but his fox would be able to bring him back! You love fox torture way to much! I must say though, it was very graphic, like I was watching all of it happen.!!!! Again please hurry and update soon!!!
person Shuichi
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You amaze me I thought this was over with slightly Of course, i also wondered what ever happened to that one dude! Now I know I hope you post the fic soon I lurve it!
person yuyugirl4ever(Not signed in)
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!! That was so sad. I cringed just reading it! I know what the item was or I think I do. It was one of the fox's beautiful tails. I think i'm actually going to cry. You kind of left it on a cliff hanger, but I can't complain. Because you have read my cliff hangers. LOL. I can't wait for the update and the upcoming battle. Now the question is 'Who is going to die', because someone has too! I still love your story and I'm a faithful reader, you will never lose me. I hope you continue to write more stories that follow this arc. PS. I can't hardly wait for the next one!.*grins* ^_^
person comicfancat
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh how could you,ending that chapter with what looks like Kurama's death(though we know better)yet still.I sit here holding my middle with a phantom pain just reading this chapter and poor Hiei.If he dosen't get the biggest revenge on Kawema and the bady than your just not right I know it has to be Hiei that Kurama hears in his head and I hope Hiei can hear him so he gets there faster.On a thought it might be cool to have Kewa(the calm mild one)find out about the godling knowing this whole time and not helping and go nuts on him.Having Hiei find out after everything is said and done.
Can't wait to see what you have cooked up,please let it be good for Kurama,he been through enough....no? Anyway as always nicely written and look forward to the update
person shiorifoxiesmom
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Evil author! Kurama torture and a cliffy. Creapy but good chapter. That update better be soon with the guys to the rescue.
person Suryallee
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love it really much! thanks for telling me that there is a new chapter out!
person Mz.Bitz.
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OHHHH! It finally came! Your next chapter. I'm not dissapointed at all. I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. Lucky me, I refreshed the main page and saw that you updated! This is a really beautiful piece of work. Can't wait to see how it all turns out.
person Nite Nite *not logged in*
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I"VE FOUND YOU AGAIN! *Cries* When my other computer decided it wanted to stop working I lost all my saved stories! I'm the 100th reviewer! *Does woot woot dance then grins* Hehe...Hiei got him some.

Hiei: *Narrows eyes* Shut up Nite.

NN: Hhehee...Kurama *shakes head* you were all like I've got to be nice and last offer her lunch but then Hiei came up behind you and rubbed against and was like hello...its been awhile lets get...reacquainted and you were like ok bye mom gotta go and-. *Snickers*

Kurama: *Blushes* You'd be the same way! >.<

NN: I'm glad Hiei can see again, I thought it was sweet how he just wanted to stare at him *teary eyed* It was so..so *cries*

Hiei: *walks over and bonks Nite in the head with the hilt of his sword* Get a hold of yourself.

NN: Ok *wraps arms around self* Better?

Hiei: -_-;

Kurama: *Chuckles* She's just messin with you firebear.

NN: O,O FIREBEAR!

Hiei: KURAMA!

Kurama: Ohhh...didn't mean to say that out loud...sry.

NN: *cracks up*

Hiei: *Glares*

NN:*blinks and tackles Hiei* DON"T YOU EVER RUN AWAY FROM KURA AGAIN! *pulls out fork*

Hiei: *Gulps* Ok...

Kurama: *walks over and picks Nite off of Hiei and then holds to Hiei glarin at Nite*

NN: What...

Kurama: MINE...no...touch.

NN: ^_^; ok...yea all yours...all your...whipcream...

Kurama/Hiei: *look at each other and snicker*

NN: ^_^ Update again soon!