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I am so glad that you updated I so love this story and you
know what you really did put your heart and soul into this chapter I
really do love your story.

...Wow. What else can I say? This last chappie brought me to tears. I had to dry off my keyboard before I could type this. Wow.

That was... just wow. It really felt like my heart was hurting just thinking about Ayame WATCHING as Kurama got tortured, for six days! I mean I can see, yes it was the only thing, but it's like OH MAN. I love all of your works, and this one is no different. I can't wait to see the next chapter.

Oh man that was an emotional chapter. Awesome job with it, you kept everyone perfectly in character and brought their emotions through as if I was actually there and experiencing it. Wonderful detail and length, I anxiously await the next chapter. Keep up the great work

How could you,I cried almost all the way through this chapter.I'll bet it was draining,it drained me just to read it even knowing he wasn't going to stay dead from "bugs".And wow Hiei kept more than his cool with Koenma and it wasn't a big surprise that he'd want to join Kurama.Yet I hope you can get past it in yourself so that we can as well in your writting and finish the next chapter.I'm cheering for you with that,plus what a chapter it should be after all Hiei and the gang couldn't tear apart Koenma but oh what they could do to Intaro(may the lashing out continue)A calming yet maybe heart felt chapter also could be the comig week as Kurama's body heals and the first meeting back with Shiori and Hiei I'll look forward to as well.Some how I still feel Koenma needs a small lesson in what he did as well maybe from Kurama himself after all they must come to terms with each other after letting Kurama suffer so.Wow what a hard bunch of chapters to write yet I know you can do it and do it well .All your other chapters and/or stories show this to be true.Looking forward to the next update and hope it isn't to long in coming. :)

Gods and angels, ...I really can't think of anything else to say....except to add devils and demons....which happens to be the most intense....prayer type thing I can think of...to invoke all the spirits...sorry, this isn't making sense. Gods...maybe I'll know what to say in a week, but right now, I have utterly no clue. I kept thinking, "No, it can't be true" and that it was...a dream...a fancy of an overtaxed mind...but to find out why....gods. I'm sorry, this isn't making sense.

Ch. 33
O.O Wow. That's one of the best stories I've EVER read. It was.... amazing. I absolutely loved all of it! It was so sad when Hiei tried to kill himself, I bawled like a baby. I can't wait 'til you update! I loved your story so much, I don't even have the words to describe how cool it was!

Oh my gosh very good plot fucking awesome love the style of writting you have please continue soon

This is one of my favorite stories and it just keeps getting better. I get excited every time I see an update. Your heart comes shining through in this chapter especially when Hiei calls Shiori 'Kaasan' (I know y).ou heard that in my other review, I just had to say it again Update soon.

You sure made me cry with the last 3 chapters, specially with the las t one.I felt like cryin´ the whole time while i was reading it! I could only breath again at the end of the chapter! I have to say that you got perfectly what everyone felt about kurama´s death, it was just so sad, but perfect. Although i don´t like hatanaka, i think he'd should stayed at genkai's. Now, i hope kurama will be back to life soon, and that he and hiei'll be the ones who´ll kill intaro, and i hope he´ll be in a lot of pain!Please, make him suffer a lot!! I really hope he'll get the worse of all hells!