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September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was one of the best chapters in the story. It was cute, funny, sad, and touching at the same time. I liked the little bits of humor thrown in there (like when Hiei burned the nurse.^_^) One thing I really liked was the "blink, blink" game (as I call it). It just seemed so cute when that Kurama was asked a question and he would go "blink, blink" for no, or "blink, blink, blink" for yes. Does that sound weird? Oh well, I just thought it was a cute little touch to a wonderful chapter. There were to many things that I liked about this chapter that I can't remember comment about them in this review (I just thought that the "blink, blink" thing was so cute that I had to say something about it. [I might be the only one who commented about it.]) I just want to say that it was a wonderful chapter and please update soon!
Sincerely Mea ^_^
Sincerely Mea ^_^
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September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Its safe to say I CRIED! I really love your writings and I really hope for more.. Please keep this going for as long as possible! Its SO sweet! love it!
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September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay update! ^__^ *dances around* I loved it as per usual. Oh man, I can't believe its already coming to a close (even though I just started reading it a short time ago). Sooo wonderful! Hiei's little speech about how he felt so helpless was beautiful. It touched me. He is so devoted to his fox, and his fox in turn devoted to him. This story always leaves me speechless after I read some of it, I just lose the words to express how utterly beautiful and perfect it is. I can't wait for the next/last chapter!! *jumps around in anticipation* I just know it will be wonderful! Oh! And as to more in the story/timline arc... I say: SWEET!! (has read Bugs! but hasn't reviewed for some unknown reason) I would so be reading each and every story connected to this one and Bugs! Wonderful job!!! Can't wait for the next chappie!!
(ps- yes, all in one day. Took sooo long, but was soooooo worth it!!)
(ps- yes, all in one day. Took sooo long, but was soooooo worth it!!)
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September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
::Sniffles unable to help it and grabs her tissue box:: OMG that was so lovely. This chapter I think... was the best one... so full of emotion, so much love, helplessness, and hope. It was the most touching thing I have read in a long time. Keep up the good work and I look forward to the next chapter... this one was just... wow... amazing...absolutely amazing... I was touched... very touched.
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September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. God!!! This is one of the best KH stories I've ever read! (and I've read quite a few) My heart just goes out to the poor tortured fox and his beloved fire demon as they suffer the worst of everything. I just want to cuddle them and tell them that everything will be alright in the end. You are such a wonderful writer. I mean, WOW! It touches me to read this story. I couldn't stop reading it today (spent practically all day reading it) and I simply can't wait for more! Oh I can't wait! Beautiful story! Wonderfully written! I bow down and worship you. *praises*
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September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thats exactly what I meant, koenma is a child-rule, he isn´t grown up now but his father gives me creeps all the time i read a fik with him inside. Thats also why I dont like the entire happy chappy reikei thing the most uses, its based of some very wrong asumptions abaut the good and bad. In the later series when enma gives the order out to kill yusuke, that was not the first time I realised that the reikei is to taken very sereosly and with back thoughts all the time.
But thats my thoughts about this all and must not the meaning of every body else.
Poor kurama!
But thats my thoughts about this all and must not the meaning of every body else.
Poor kurama!
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September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can´t believe it's the end for the fox torture! (although i think it's just momentary) That means that next chapter i won´t be biting my nails while i'm reading, and that's good, cause i have no nails left after last chapters.
I´ll be waiting for the fluffness!!
I´ll be waiting for the fluffness!!
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September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well its 12.15 am here and I was going past your web site and saw the new chapter,no I couldn't wait till after I got up so I read it open mouthed and nearly crying again wow.It seemed like something Kurama would do to protect his Hiei and his friends(a bonus).And believably that Ema would pull something like that after they got rid of a major threat and all,plus you'd think the hospital would report this after all Kurama's gone through way to much.Anyway,my heart hurts after all this and am hoping for some really long nice fluff for Hiei and Kurama and much needed play time along with the healing.What happened to Kurama's tail and how do you restore the pain from that(ouch)? If I didn't know he gets through this only to go through some family stuff later I'd think you like having us bitting our nails reading your stuff.Not really complaining,I love your stories and have passed them on to some friends to read and can't wait for the next chapter and wondering when the 3rd one starts.Oh and wondering if it'll be Kurama's mom or Hiei that lets him know how much closer Hiei and Kuramas mom are getting?
Great job..... :)
Great job..... :)
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September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've seen people trussed up in the ICU....it's difficult too look at, even if they're not one of yours...scary...it's hard to be reminded of your own moratlity while looking at someone barely hanging onto theirs. I look forward to the fluff...it'll be a healing anodyne to the angst...even if there is some agnst in the fluff. I'm happy and surprised you got this chapter out so quickly. Thank you...and congratulations on almost being finished with your baby :D Thank you very much for sharing.
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September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh boy, an update on one of my favorite stories. Yeah the Kurama torture is over. Hurray for fluff. Update soon.