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Great chapter. Opps, Keiko and Yusuke got caught. HEHE Glad that Yukina went and healed Kurama and that Shiori was smart enough to put it together that Hiei is Yukina's sister. Can't wait for more.

Hi ya it's me the girl who can be really annoying. Okay here's the news on Animespiral theif. *Changes voice to match ogre* Smartstar has taken off Coming clean I repeat that she/he has taken of coming clean that is all. *changes voice back to Botan's* Anyway so that's the news. I can't wait to read your updation on Bugs. Anyway update soon. Later. Botan PS if you would be so kind to review some of my stories on both ff.net and animespiral.com both under Kayko15 and on anime spiral I also have one under Botan15. Thanks Later.

Yet another chapter, yet another work of arte. I find it most endearing and charming; the fact that you like the positive feedback everyone is giving you. As you may or may not be aware of, you deserve every nice comment directed towards you, for your writing is most advanced and lovely. I liked the way Yukina was portrayed; I too have imagined Yukina to be stronger than she let on. I'm also very pleased that someone finally portrayed Hiei and a more sexually innocent demon then such a seductive one, because I doubt he has had any sexual relationships with anyone, and you portrayed that fantasticaly.I apologize for writing such a long review, but I felt it necesary to explain how perfectly you portray your characters, and how well written this is. I am... 'patiently' awaiting the next chapter of your story (or as patiently as anyone with the name 'forbbiden child' can wait). Write soon.

~Respectfully
fobrbiden_child

Like I said before about the thief. Anyway, I'm glad that Yukina's being tough in this, but not you know... a butch? Forgive the derrogatory term. I tend to use it freely when it descibes me so well. I hardly find it offensive.

As you can see from the name, I adore Hiei, and I now officially adore you for writing a fic as lovely as this. I usually never review stories, unless I'm insulting someone, but you my dear have earned my respect by writing this fic. Not only is your writing tasteful and descriptive, but it whets the appetite and made me crave for more. Never have I actually read something and have enjoyed it so thoroughly. I hope you update quickly, for this is definitely the best fan fic I've ever read of all time.

~Respectfully,
forbbiden_child

I applaud you for what you've done. I'm glad that you've stood up for your story being stolen. Especially if it's your baby. I know the first one I've ever written (The search for Puu) Is my pride and joy and I just love it to pieces. I'd post it up but it's like rated 'G'. And i couldn't stand if anything happened to it. Later. Botan

Sorry I didn't review at the last chapter but you know how computers act up(I hope)
Anyway,All I can say is wow to the last two chapters.Its great to see Hiei and Kurama's mom
connecting so well,you almost hope she gets a moment alone with him,almost.
Gotta figure Yusuke would be the one to understand without saying and help the two out as well.
Hope you update soon. Hey when are you updateing "Bugs" Aren't you going to let Hiei wake soon or what?

And shame on me for not reviewing sooner. I've read this on your site and over at ff.net...I've reviewed it over at ff.net...so why not here, too...

I've run into nurses like both the ones you described. Personally, I (and the medical community is *starting* [slowly] to) think pain management should be the number one concern...there are all kinds of pain killers, cycle them if need be...I am typing random thoughts invoked by the story...

I really like your writing style...were you to have a book written, I would definately need to buy it :D (there, that may be more of a review, ne?) I've gotten too much sun today, so I'll wander off now ;D

I can't organize my thoughts so, here's a list:
1. “He already thinks I am too feminine. To find me in the arms of another male....” < AWW. I thought that was such a cute line.
2. KURAMA IS SO SWEET, KEEPING THE SECRET, EVEN THOUGH HE IS LIKE DYING OF PAIN!
3. I can completely understand why Hiei couldn't say it back, I totally see it! Why am I talking like this?, or rather typing. Anyway, oh man these two are just toooooo cute. =]

I can't wait for the next chapter

To Anon-
You are a stupid homophobic bitch, who is gonna get her ass kicked some day! If you don't like this story, don't read it! I like this story, other people like this story, so leave us alone! This is a really good story that has a great plot! Most stories today don't have that, but this one does! So stop all this flaming! :P
To mhmartina-
I love this story, Anon is just stupid. Please continue!
Sincerely Mea ^_^