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Wow...multichapter updates...confusled the poor 'Colleen-girl...anyways...I think Hiei seeking advice and giving his fox the baby tree was absolutely sweet! And yay for demonic healing abilities getting Kurama out of the hospital so quickly (both his own and Yukina's)...I'm currently reading the last chapter you updated (14)...but I wanted to get comments down before I forgot them....14 is a difficult chapter to read (I'm sure it was difficult to write, too)...I just had a nitpicking moment (most people wouldn't even notice) but "prone" is face-down..."supine" is face-up....as I said, most people wouldn't notice or even know...and "a good place to stop"? Methinks you're a sadist! Anyways. I really do enjoy your stories very much. Thank you :D

Oh, so mean. Bad cliffie. Who is breaking in and poor Kurama. Then Yukina finds out, wow, what a great chapter. Makes me want to read more.

I love Yusuke¤Keiko moments. They are such a sweet couple.... *grabs her tissues*

YAY, things are taking a turn. Well the one thing that stuck out in thsi chapter, for me, was the line "Yusuke answered, 'When I realized you are more important than my bad-ass image.'" OMGOSH, that tore into my heart and made me make AWWW sounds. Usually, I don't care much for Yusuke and Keiko, but that was just so cute.

This chapter is sweet, and reassuring. Almost a break from the angst that came before and will come after...a calm in the storm. Much enjoying this story :D

What a great chapter. HEHE, I love Keiko's parents, especially the last comments about how yusuke and Keiko did better then they had. I'm glad that Kurama is recovering so nicely though. And the tree part was very cool. Thanks so much.

To Anon,
Shut your fucking mouth you homophobic freak of pond scum. If i knew where you lived I'd come and beat the fucking shit out of you. That's so mean to call somebody a bed buddy when they aren't.

Oh my gosh that was so funny at the end, when Keiko and Yusuke got caught! ^__^ Oh man, it seems that usually the lovers get ripped a new one much worse when they get caught by the GIRL'S parents rather than the boy's- isn't that annoying? Oh, I can NOT wait to see how that one plays out (though I'm pretty sure that Mr. Yukimura doesn't kill Yusuke, huh? XD) Yay, Yukina got to healing Kurama, maybe now he can leave the damn hospital for a little while at least, huh? I'll look forward to seeing what happens in the next chapter (such as, how badly does Yusuke get beaten up by the parents Yukimura).

I do really enjoy the depth of character development, the tenderness, the sharpness of Shiori. I do think Yukina has a backbone. I don't think she would have survived or withstood the torment inflicted on her by ....what's his name...if she didn't have a back bone (I'm not good with names). I think she's a lot like silk...soft, supple, but very strong. Enjoying this :D

Wow you let Kurama's mom in on more than I thought you would.though I'm glad she said nothing
to Hiei's sister.If nothing else showing respect to Hiei with that,that I hope Hiei act knowledges some where along the line.It was better to not heal him all the way after all how would that be explained.
Look forward to the chapters of bugs and yeah I know what you mean about it ending(yet all good things do) Will look for the 3rd installment as well ,can't imagine what the topic would be yet know I will not be disappointed i'm sure. Nicely done so far :)