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May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GASP OMGOSH! Dun dun dunnnn. Oh poor Hiei! Poor Kurama! Update soon! =]
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May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hate it when I know I have something gramatically correct and the MSWord still underlines it in green (as a gramatical mistake)...or when I have mistakes and it doesn't underline them...I also hate tot he...I also tend to think that "each other" should be one word every time I type it...or I'll type "i t" instead of "it" Anyways...
Poor poor Hiei....he wants so much to have things work out, as does Kurama, but they both haven't learned the fine are of communication...One could have hoped that Kurama would have remembered the fear he'd had to work Hiei through before he told him to "just go"....but, then, I suppose "Coming Clean" is about learning to communicate....
I look forward to your next update, no matter how long it takes...though, I think I'll only be reviewing the chapters on one site ;)
Poor poor Hiei....he wants so much to have things work out, as does Kurama, but they both haven't learned the fine are of communication...One could have hoped that Kurama would have remembered the fear he'd had to work Hiei through before he told him to "just go"....but, then, I suppose "Coming Clean" is about learning to communicate....
I look forward to your next update, no matter how long it takes...though, I think I'll only be reviewing the chapters on one site ;)
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May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow! huge updated I can barely keep my eyes open for reading late at night but damn it it was so worth it. Oh my gosh poor fox that Intaro bastard should rot great chapters they are so good and and my one word to described this is fantastic keep it up you have talent.
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May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW, I just read all your latest posts. I feel so bad for Hiei and loved Yusuke and Kuwabara's acceptance of the two demons. I'm glad Hiei is getting better and that Kurama is too now. I would write a longer review, but it's almost 2 am. and I'm tired.
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May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man, I just adore this story. You write so well. Even the gaps in time are made to transission well so it doesn't leave you going "WTF happened" <33 That's a problem alot of authors have but you seem to have risen above all that. All your stories are just awesome. As for this last batch of chapters, which I nearly fell out of my chair because I was so excited about seeing them...I think it was a very cool twist that you made Hiei go blind. It was the perfect opportunity for him to open up, even if it almost forced him to, he needed it. Gave him time to review what really matters. And you've done an excellent job in portraying the emotions in the story. I won't take up your time with a long review....but I have to just say that this is one of my favorite fics and I am eagerly awaiting the next parts!!! Keep up the magnificent work. <3333333333
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May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man, I just adore this story. You write so well. Even the gaps in time are made to transission well so it doesn't leave you going "WTF happened" ^___^ That's a problem alot of authors have but you seem to have risen above all that. All your stories are just awesome. As for this last batch of chapters, which I nearly fell out of my chair because I was so excited about seeing them...I think it was a very cool twist that you made Hiei go blind. It was the perfect opportunity for him to open up, even if it almost forced him to, he needed it. Gave him time to review what really matters. And you've done an excellent job in portraying the emotions in the story. I won't take up your time with a long review....but I have to just say that this is one of my favorite fics and I am eagerly awaiting the next parts!!! Keep up the magnificent work.
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May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome chapter, can't wait to see how they work things out. Update soon please.
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May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Why'd you leave it there! I can't beleive you did that! Now I have to wait a long time to see what happens! AHHHHHHHH! Okay, that's out of my system. Please try to update fast. Please!
Sincerely Mea ^_^
PS- All my pateints is going into waiting for this next chapter.
Sincerely Mea ^_^
PS- All my pateints is going into waiting for this next chapter.
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May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
When I put that last review, I didn't mean to rush you. I just meant that it is going to be hard to wait for the next chapter. Please don't rush yourself, but try to get the next chapter up as fast as you can. Thank You
Sincerely Mea, again
Sincerely Mea, again
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May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was not so long in coming...I could still remember what chapter you'd left off with before...or that may have been the little note you added to the summary...I do like this story and am glad that you're enjoying writing it.
I only caught a couple of errors....a couple of times where the word "front" was when it should have been "forward" a "tot he" instead of "to the" and a strange "AlLII" or something like that in the last chapter....nothing huge...and I know how hard it is to catch everything on your own...I know I've put out a few errors in my stories...I even know of one place where I stuck a fragment, but haven't bothered to fix it yet....ah, wells... :D
I look forward to your next chapter, as well as to the next installment of Bugs :D
I only caught a couple of errors....a couple of times where the word "front" was when it should have been "forward" a "tot he" instead of "to the" and a strange "AlLII" or something like that in the last chapter....nothing huge...and I know how hard it is to catch everything on your own...I know I've put out a few errors in my stories...I even know of one place where I stuck a fragment, but haven't bothered to fix it yet....ah, wells... :D
I look forward to your next chapter, as well as to the next installment of Bugs :D