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July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY! Hiei has his vision back! That was such a sweet, lovely chapter. It was definitely worth the wait. I just love how well you portray the emotions, and the relationship itself. Can't wait for the next update. =]
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June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story!! This is one of the most realistic or true to character fics I have read. I love the interaction between Hiei and Karama and it is fun to watch thier relationship grow. I think that Shiori is a bit to overbearing in this story but it seems to work for all intents and pruposes. I am greatly anticipating the completion of this story. Please update soon!!!!!
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June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. wish I could write fan fics as good as you do. Good luck on up coming chapters!
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June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have read many fanfics. Most have made me just wanna slap the authors, but this one is different. this one is more then just good, it's beautiful. the emotions that are in this story have touched my heart and helped me to view the world at a different angle. it takes a really sensitive and caring person to write this indepth of work. please update soon and keep writing.
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June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This made me cry!!! I love it. I think that it's one of the best stories that i have ever read. you should really consider writing a novel or something. i would definetly read it. keep up the good work.
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May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow another great chapter Oh man Hiei Poor Hiei and Kurama too. Well its all right if you take time to post up Chapter just remember don't take to long all right well keep it up. One hell of a job you do
Ja ne
Ja ne
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May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG you made me cry. Poor little Hiei. Please update soon. I need a reconciliation cry now.
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May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Umm... you posted the 14th chapter of Bugs instead of Coming Clean's 30th chapter.
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May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yeah updationness. You've gotta update soon. I wanna find out what happens! And don't worry about spell check or grammer. Hell I know that I ignore my spell checker half the time. Anyway I gotta go I'm starting to get hungry. Later. Botan
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May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS SO EFFIN' CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!