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for Lesson One, Demon Pride

by kawaiikitsunethief

person Aikou Yami
schedule May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was one hell of a good story :) I love it.
person Kuranga108
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this one-shot was awesome!!! never read anything like it before. this was way too cool. great, great story!!!
person Hotaru1421
schedule April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Do you have any other yaoi stories with Youko in them?! Please tell me you do! E-mail me!
person hColleen
schedule April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That's actually kinda creepy...in a weird and twisted and...whoa...type way...very strange
person LittleKitsune
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Disturbing, but oh so good. I love the last line. Silly mortal, mercy is for fools!! *looking evil* ok, this has brought on a drak mood.. but in a good way.
Must listen to heavy metal now (or at least rock)
*gets two HUGE thrubs up signs*
I Salute your dark mind!!
*we see a certain little fox drawing evil chibis, listning to Rammstien and Metallica*
person MultifacetedTune
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy Shit. OMG, that was amazing!!! What a neat idea!!! Oh, I do hope that you plan to continue it............ *wants to know what happens when the others realize what Kurama has "turned into"* ....I just hope that you don't have him......"do anything"......with Kuwabara. *shudders* Sorry, can't help it......not that I don't like Kuwabara, per se, it just that.....welllllll...........you know! ^^ Now Hiei or Yuusuke, on the other hand........ ^___~ Keep up the good work!!! Ja ne!!!
person suchahentai
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was awesome. the last image was perfect, its about time kurama got some spine.
person Lurker
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*mouth drops open in shock* *sputters* You cannot be cruel enough to keep this as a one-shot! Hell if you do keep it that way, there must at least be a sequel! I mean, jesus. *stares at fic again and re-reads it* That ending is just begging for a sequel. Hell, *I'm* begging for a sequel! I've never been the person that fully embraces the whole 'Kurama has two souls in one body' thing (frankly, the idea has me brooding for a bit everytime it comes up, and I frequently avoid the topic whenever I can.) However, stories like this always interest me; I did like the way Yoko confronts his human counterpart and makes him accept who he is and who he will always be. I've always taken a liking to Yoko, probably because I'm all for demons and bloodshed (or bloodlust for that matter). Letting the youko out after such a long time of holding him back promise's much bloodshed, so I'm all for this fic. *nod nod* (What can I say, I'm sick *shakes head at her undeniably freakish ways*). But again, the ending is going to kill me, there is so much weight in those words... I'd really love to see more of this if you're willing to write more.

Basically, I enjoyed reading this immensely, Yoko in all his cold, cruel, demonic glory; defiling his counterpart (and what a fucking headtrip THAT was!) is always a good way to start off my day at 4 A.M. lol
person shikari
schedule March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was a ausome story!!! it sent chills down my spine!!!
person Hotaru1421
schedule March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...that was just...wow...why must that be a one-shot? do you have any other Youko/Kurama stories? Please tell me!