rate_review Reviews

Sweetness! When is lesson 2?

Ahh. Just the way a demon SHOULD behave.
I liked this, very much.

Like, wow. Hot. Absolutely hot.
There is really no more i can say...
but wow!

Wonderful job, really! I would've liked to see a bit more description towards the end when the others find him... I was mildly confused...was Kurama when they found him their old Kurama, Youko, or the "new" Kurama? Other than that, good job! I'd like to read more!
Sincerely,
ValleyKnown

awesome!!! ya think ya could make a sequel?

Sugoi... this is intense. Are you planning on another chapter?

HOLY CRAP!

That was CREEPTAZTIK!

I love how EVIL you made Youko! He is a demon afterall....

And that madness about it being Shuuichi's mind totally pwn3d ASS...

"Do you need to be taught a lesson?" is now written on all my binders. The profeseurs look at it and say I need to be taught a lesson, which makes me pretty much laugh my ass off. Because all my teachers this semester are these old geezers that I think would die if they ever saw a guy with a guy.

But that's just too bad for them, ne? They aren't privy to such CREEPTAZTIKNESS as this story, which is really too bad.\

KEEP WRITING POUR LES PETITS ENFANTS!!!

That was great I loved it!!! I swear that was great I am a sadist at heart so it would have been nice if you coulda put in some of the ways the low level Youkai died. But I am satisfied.

Wow. I second my 'Wow'. That was... twisted, and yet, so beautifully written... and the last line was classic! You truly have a talent for this. Great job!

I've read this several times by now, and i have to say this is amazing. Are you doing a sequel at any point? If it wasn't at the point of night when i am half-asleep, i'd be typing "please" every other word with many exclamation points and whatnot...