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April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very hot. I loved how you kept Hiei and Yuusuke in character (they would, of course, fight to be on top). Most authors just make one of them uncharacteristically a whimpering uke. Anyway, great work, I look to reading more from you.
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April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Pointless smut is good, why elso do you think we're here?
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April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yusuke's such an animal, Grrrrrrrrrrr. I'll some of that, please! ^_~ Another hot chappie. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, K.
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April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very yummy pointless smut :D I enjoyed it a lot :D Both chapters...very yummy :D
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April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was real great! I wish some author could write a fic like this for Kurama and Kazuma. But I do like to see what happen next!
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April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heh! Yusuke went firefly hunting! Wonderful lemon! It was so delicious! Hiei and Yusuke are something better that Kuramar¤Hiei I'll say!
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April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
loved the chapter maybe you should do another hunt but its kurama and yusuke that is if you decide to contniue.
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April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't know which chapter was hotter! I like how you turned the tables and made Yusuke the agressor. Loved it!!
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April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Finally! I Hiei/Yusuke fic I like! Most stories out there are Hiei and Kurama and abbandon the characters' personality for badly written smut. Thought your story was smut to I liked it and I could believe it. It wasn't some slut Yusuke laying there with his legs open hoping Hiei would fuck his brains out. In fact I iliked the chase. I hope you write more, even if not continueing this story I hope you'll write another H/Y fic.
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March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That is such a cool fic! Could you perhaps write a sort of sequal to it? 'Cuz what Hiei said at the end. It's just begging for a sequal. It's Yuusuke's turn! Please?