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LOVE IT!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!

I must say I wish I could write like you do. But since I can not I have read all of you yu yu hakusho and kenshi storys and all I can say is PLEASE OH PLEASE do not take to much longer I NEED chapter 3 to this story Im so hooked its not even funny

How exciting, I love this one
I didn't notice the ooc in your characters, I think there great
i can't wait for the next update

This is a great chapter!! I can't wait to read more!! I can't wait to read more!! :)

HI! So far this is great- and no, Karasu isn't an OOC yet. As it was hinted, he indeed seemed to be obsessed with Youko and that should be shown a little more if possible. To me, he should be a little more possessive of Keiko because after all, she was his prey before Kurama's and he introduced her into the dark hunt first. Youko was written very well and his feelings towards Keiko seem very believeable but his dislike of Karasu's attention could be there for contrast. As for Keiko, such a naughty little streak in her! She's fun to watch, like a bird caught in the deadly gaze of a snake! I can't wait to see where you'r going to take her!

I think the chapter was perfect myself. Can't wait to read the next one! Update soon please.

This fic is so dark and creepy -- I love it! I don't think that Karasu is that OOC. He has expressed a gentle side and an appreciation of beauty with Kurama, although it is certainly in his own twisted way. By all means, continue this story. You're on to something.

Wonderfully written. Karasu is in perfect character given the situation. Plus this is fiction and you can take some liberties, within reason. I too, hate reading story where everyone is soooo out of character that they just sound stupid. However, you've done a terrific job with Karasu. Your sense of detail is perfect. And the lemon is very hot and sexy. I really can't wait for the rest. I wouldn't mind having Kurama and Karasu sharing a moment either, but if not, the 3-some works as is. I'm a yaoi writer so I'm always looking for the male/male twist even though I love het too. Good luck with the next chappie. ^_^

I don't know about OOC'ness....my mind's a bit dazed....and I think I might be drooling....check back later...maybe my mind will return.... ;)_

This was SO good you have to continue, although im wondering if you ever finish a fic you start, but PLEASE finish this one!!