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August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sweet, I liked it. That was so cute!
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May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just read the first two chapters, and so far I really like it! I have never read a fanfic set in the time after the revolution, but before he meets Kaoru, so your interpretation of his mental state and behavior is really interesting and well done. I am very impressed that this fic was written by two people. Your writing styles must blend together very well. The descriptions, pacing, dialouge etc are all top notch. If I ever do get around to watching Yu Yu Hakasho it will be interesting to see how my perception of the characters based on your descriptions match up to what I see on screen. I'm sure I'm missing out on some subtlities from not having seen that show, but I still like this fic quite a bit.
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May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww, hot and sweet all at the same time. I don't read many crossovers because those I have read have often been painfully out of character even if they were amusing, but this one (and it is true I can't really speak for anyone but Kenshin) seemed very appropriate and true to the original anime. Also, when done correctly, which you obviously have a knack for, crossovers inspire more creative plotlines. That is also evident here. I really must learn more of this Kurma. He sounds positively scrumptious. Did I really just say that? :)
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May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just have to reread this story over and over again its just so great and such a romantic shot in the arm to tide me over on my hentai withdrawls:)
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March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SEXXXXXXXXXXXXXYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Damn you wymen really know how to make a gyrl melt in her birkenstocks. I freaking love the emotional connection between them that was so great I just want to squeez little Kenshin into tiny pieces. And that eye color change thing was great. 'Red' thing was very amusing. I just love love love how you put in the sound effects and that you have Kenshin talk dirty. That's so freaking sexy and with sweet nothings he keeps murmering he's got such a sexy voice on the cartoon I just love it. Great job I'm still fanning myself that was so HOT and romantic! ^_^
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March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How perfect and beilverable the kenshin is kuram past incarantion. Cool fic. Hope you update soon.
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March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Noooo! *cries* I want more! I want to read the lemon at the end of part 4! *cries* Man! That was a great story! I loved it! You are a fantastic writer! That was a brillant idea to use Kurama as Kenshin's reincarnation. Anyway, I can't wait to read more of your future stories! Keep up the good work!
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March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I read part three yesterday, but didn't have a chance to review (my brother hahaha) so now I have to review both parts....WHICH I LOVED!!! That was soooo good!!! I loved this story!!! Excellent job and keep up the great work of making stories!!! I cryied and I just loved it all!!! Thank you for making it!!!!!
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March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww!!! Kawaii desu! That was soo romantic!!! *Squels with delight* Ohh and I figured it out, Kurama is the reincarnation of Kenshin! Please, please update soon!
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March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
!!! Love it!!! Is Kurama Kenshin's rencarnation? The pairing.... *clapping * WOOOW!! So THAT'S why his eyes are violet... Keiko's fault! *squeeling and sighing*
I await the fourth part eagerly!!
.. *trying not to jump up and down at the beuty of the story*
I await the fourth part eagerly!!
.. *trying not to jump up and down at the beuty of the story*