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March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
At times I thought that throughout this fic the conversations and thoughts were a tad bit redundant. But please don't get me wrong! I enjoyed this fan fic very much and I can't wait to see the next chapter! The whole idea is interesting in itself even though there are plenty of Rape fics... this seems to me like fresh sushi. Yum, yum. I'm anxious to know who the rapist is too. A few years ago Hiei probably would have been the most likely candidate, but now-a-days it could be anybody! Anyways, you have a good day okay? Bye!
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March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
o.O Wow. very descriptive! The plot... and is it Hiei? You mentioned a blade. All I can really say is... wow. Where'd this idea come from? It's well written, and I'm waiting to figure out what sends him over the edge. You captured the feeling of one type of rape accurately - sex they knew they wanted, but morals/unrequited love voted against. The conflict betwwen keeping it a secret or teling a friend (who'd overreact) was also pretty true to life. Er.. don't ask how i know. Anyway, it gets my vote! I'll be waiting for an update.
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March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey, please continue the story. You're a great writer. so please, don't stop it. *gets big sad puppy eyes*
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March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh.....me likey! XD I can already tell that this will be a most interesting story indeed, so don't abandon it! URGH, I've seen WAY too many good stories abandoned without being completed, I refuse to let you do the same!
Hehe, well, now that I've basically threatened you ^_^ tis a very good story, and I look forward to an update (soon? Please?)
Hehe, well, now that I've basically threatened you ^_^ tis a very good story, and I look forward to an update (soon? Please?)
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March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great story. Not much for the N/C, but I loves me some Kurama! *hands bag of jellybeans to author* Now, share that with the others. you know. Anyway, keep up the great work on this story. I smell an EMMY! Wait... do fanfics get awards?
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March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very interesting, please update soon
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March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please, it either Hiei or Karasu. But I know it Hiei, it all ways Hiei. Or it could be Yusuke it one of the three. You make the plot to notice able. So it either it Hiei, (thought I think it Hiei, it all ways him.) Karasu or Yusuke.