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I'm not sure if this really is the right word, but it's lovely...actually, I'm pretty sure that's not quite right...but I'm bordering on braindead at the moment...I liked it...very much... I look forward to see what you have planned...or pops into your head.

Great chapter, I'm still so confused by what is happening. But, I can't wait for more and for it to all become clear. You are gifted at bringing the words to life.

Awww, I liked it! I never said it HAD to be Hiei, I just blurted out that I thought it was Hiei. A dumb mistake on my part hee-hee *snork*. You can tell I ain't no critical thinker, just your average horn dog! Since you're a talented writer, I wouldn't care what characters you are pairing, just as long as there'll be ORGASMS FOR EVERYONE!!!!!!!! HA HAAAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaa....!

Oh. And thanks for the message. It makes me feel warm and fuzzy all over. I would've wrote you back but... I'd feel like I was harrassing you! ...Shit. Just rejoice lol. ^_~ Thanks for the new chapter. Later!

You really have my interest now..who is it? Come on, tell me!

But really, I'm glad you updated. I liked how Hiei didn't violate Kurama's mind with the Jagan, and I like how Kurama is now "hungry". I'd like to see Hiei take a shot at helping Kurama with his "huger".

Good chapter. I guess it was too much for my romantic heart to hope it was Hiei. I still like the story and will faithfully read to find out what the surprise at the end is. Update soon.

I LOVE THIS STORY!!! YOUR A GREAT WRITER, PLEASE DON'T STOP WRITING IT!!!! ;_;

Even though hiei is hot, not everyone is hoping it's him. There are all ready so many stories of the two of them.
Karasu or Yomi would work too. ^_^
And just because its a blade doesn't mean its a sword. Anyone can have a blade.

And I agree with cas. I shall also wait patiently for your next update. ^_^

Of course, of course. Take as much time as you need! Rushing yourself is the the worst thing you could do, and it ruins your health believe it or not. Unless you're one of those people that work best under pressure...

You have a good day ^_^

If it helps you at all: forget what the reviewers say and write your story your way. You reeled us all in with the first chapter; I'm sure you'll do just fine on the rest.

Every time I see that this is updated I get all excited. Then it's an author's note. I don;t thik I can take much more of this! ^_^

Seriously, you said you saw reviews that wanted it to be Hiei. But you sound like you were not planning for it to be Hiei. Do what you were planning, and guess what: people will still read it and still enjoy it. (I hope it's not Hiei, but it's not my story.) Really, whatever you're going to do will be just fine, so don't worry about two different directions. You are the author, so take it your direction. In case I haven't made it clear, you have my complete support in whatever direction you take this. (Unless that direction involves an exaggerated Mary Sue character and hideous grammar [both highly unlikely based on your first chapter], in which case I will have to chop off my fingers for having typed this. Please don't make me do that. It would suck.) Good luck.

AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Can't wait for the next chapter.

I really enjoyed this one ^^ Update soon!!