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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Due to technical difficulties, I cannot log in right now. But I wanted to leave a review anyway.
I LOVED this chapter. I love seeing Kurama so close to falling apart, and Hiei's silent (until now) love is so endearing! I see some hard times ahead for our fox, but that's what makes this story so intriguing! I really look forward to your next update, and I am so glad that 1) You decided to continue this story, and 2) That you decided to continue it your way. It's very good and you should be very proud of it.
I LOVED this chapter. I love seeing Kurama so close to falling apart, and Hiei's silent (until now) love is so endearing! I see some hard times ahead for our fox, but that's what makes this story so intriguing! I really look forward to your next update, and I am so glad that 1) You decided to continue this story, and 2) That you decided to continue it your way. It's very good and you should be very proud of it.
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I was really surprised to see that this was updated. I had thought it was a one-shot the first time I read it. I am loving this so far, please update. I admit that I was skeptical during the second chapter because it was obvious that this wasn't exactly set in the real world, but chapter 3 makes up for that. Reality can go screw itself, lol. I just want to know what happens next.
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes, it makes more sense now, i likey. I'm really at a loss for words, cause I'm tired. but I enjoyed the chapter and anxiously await more.
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like I like!! This is very intriguing... and the name Saikai no Chi to Bara has a nice flow to it, by the way lol.
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ARE YOU KIDDING?!^%#^#& You really took this story and ran with it - in such an amazing way! I am so riveted now - especially since the Urameshi Team now has to fight Kurama, and the whole craziness of Hiei loving Kurama and Kurama being "in love" with the new youko (may I order one for myself - without the curse, of course).
Well-done, now I'm craving the next chapter.
Well-done, now I'm craving the next chapter.
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Finally an update and a good one at that. Thanks for not making it Karasu. I'm okay with another character but I'm still hoping Hiei gets Kurama in the end. Update soon.
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, wow...poor Hiei! Poor Kurama...Sounds like Hadrian didn't have too good a "feel" for his mate if he thinks Kurama is her...seems he focused solely on looks...But...if Kurama didn't mark him, does that mean the mating isn't complete? Is there still a chance for Kurama to be happy with Hiei? For Hiei to be happy? Argh...questions! I know you said you'd hurry with the next chapter...please!
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October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I soo love this chapter though it was a little sad
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September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow. this is even better than when i read it a while back. then, it was only the first chapter, but since you've added the second chapter, this has gotten even better. i love the way you're keeping this whole lover thing secretive. and Kurama's reactions are great; you have him reacting to the ministrations though he doesn't want to, yet still trying to remain faithful to his human morals. i like that. update soon!
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September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very good! I cant wait for the the next chapter! please update soon!