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Noooo! Don't rewrite chapter six, it's fine. I'd rather have the epilog and what I hope will be a hppay ending. Please update before you leave.

YAY!! two new chapters!! *throws cookies* i loved it although since im a mean person Hattori should have just died and not been able to go back to his love for what he did to Kurama and Hiei!! the emotions you put into the two were amazing!! i love the way you write so keep it up!!! anyway update soon and yay for lemons!!!! ^_^

Wow,what a ending chapter yet I thought it was just a little (I dono"dry) or something.After all Hiei was put through he didn't even see the smuck get it.Plus Your right it was a little lite for a fighting scene yet still very good.Kurama has quite alot to answer for with Hiei yet being under the influance of another counts alot I'd think.Plus paying Hiei could be made to be fun for both of them,Like slave for a month or something.Can't wait to see what you do and hope you update it soon

I hope you're not teasing us with a 2 year old story that you're not going to update. It's really hot and deserves at least one more really hot lemon chapter. Update soon.

WOOT!!!...Great chapter!!! Thanks for updating!!!

hmm... now that would be something... if Kurama caught Hattori having sex with the mortal girl...

Update soon please!!!

i like this story. i also know what it is like to have a college class the is hard. i had one this term. good luck. tala

i hope you update soon!!! poor kurama and hiei so much angst but who doesnt love that!!! actually i hope hiei kills hattori no offense though!! sorry to hear school is stopping you from writing *curses school* well again update soon i need to know what happens!!!! and you write beautifully!!!!

Great Story ^-^
Please, please, please, don't let Hattori suffer too much! I'll understand if you have to kill him, but maybe as a special favour to me he could find his old lover's soul in the afterlife or something like that? It's just so sad that he's not going to get a chance of happiness when Kura and Hiei will get one another. I just can't stop thinking that he's going to die in a state of lonliness and sorry and regret...maybe I'm making too much of the character, but I really like him. ALSO, to be fair, his behaviour is inherently demonic, and confusing demon metality with human can ruin a story. I don't think that Hiei would consider Hattori a nasty piece of work because he killed humans, but because he was simply jealous. Remember, selfishness is part of being a demon, and Hattori probably wouldn't have been brought up to know wrong from right.
Anywho, that's my pitch to save the OC, which is a rare thing for me (I usually hate OCs), so please humour me!
Lol
Sukini
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Hey - I know that aff has f*cked up majorly and there is no "latest chapter", but I wanted to review since I read it last week and didn't get a chance to review.

GODS, I LOVE YOU. You actually had me wincing during the part where Kurama is screaming in pain and cursing Hiei, who is at the end of the corridor listening. Our poor poor demons! This is one great story - I was even telling my bf about it, and he was like - hey, that sounds really really cool - you usually don't get that kind of creativity in fanfiction - and he's right!

Also, most people don't know how to do OCs, but you have created quite the intriguing one! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

I'm sorry you've got sucky classes. Hopefully, since I know their part of the required courses, once you're done with them, they're done for good and you can focus more on classes that you like (the benifits of college) Good luck and best wishes!