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You write some intense stories. I'm just sorry I didn't read them sooner. Excellent work!

I'm sorry that I haven't reviewed this until now, my life has been a ball of chaos lately, but I ma SO GLAD you posted the final chapter.

The hotness of the lemon...wow. I mean...wow. I don't know what it is about Kurama screaming Hiei's name that just does it, and the mating marks at the ned of the lemon with Kurama changing form was exquisite. I didn't think that Hiei was OOC, because it was well done and explained in the story. I also loved Hiei just appearing and telling everyone to get out (that is totally Hiei).

I really loved this story, this is totally in my recommended reading!

Nice. I like the way you deal with the emotions and shock that Kurama forced upon himself and how Hiei reacted to that. I was gonna say more, but my brain decided to go on vacation...

I enjoyed this story. Thank you for sharing and I look forward to more :D

Excellent fic with an awesome ending. I loved it.

loved it!! im glad their okay now and getting married. thats so cute!! yay one shot please!! looking forward to your new story!!!

So great!I loved the story and really I don't think Hiei was"that" out of it in the last chapter after everything he went through
to get what was his to begin with.I had hoped it would be Hiei from the begining of the story yet the other demon was a great touch.
I really look forward to the one shot and second arc of this story.Nicely done

OMG this kiss! and the Youko-ness and the not hurting Hattori! I LOVED this chapter - but then again, I love anything that has Hiei being all soft and vulnerable with Kurama, and that image of him with the rose whip around his throat asking for the kiss...GYAD.

And I so loved that Hattori was so involved with thinking that Kurama was "his Rose" that he never noticed that Kurama had all these powers (Ahem, where DID that rosewhip come from? Heh).

You know, at first I was hoping that Hiei would rough Hattori up a bit for what he did to Kurama, but you wrote such a convincing OC that I began to feel for him and I realized that he's just a confused kitsune who lost his love, so I'm glad you didn't hurt him (much) after all. Good job.

And your compliments made me blush. Your story is GOD, I am worshipping you.

I'm glad you got through your classes :D Yays. Personally, unless you're only doing minor tweaking and editing, I wouldn't scrap the chapter. Seriously. I think about trashing almost everythinig I write, but I am a lot harder on myself than you guys are...I can't ever clarifly exactly what I don't like about my writing, but I'm never happy with it, y'know...I'm sure you do. But, I also have gotten to the point (mostly) where I realize my opinion of my writing is invalid until a couple of days later (after I post it) and then I can see it from a "reader's" point of view, rather than the "author's" view point...does that make sense? Until then, I really don't know what people see in my writing...I am genuinely confused by my reviews...they make me happy, yes, but confuse me...anyways...about this chapter (which is what this is supposed to be about, right?) I'm glad Hottari saw that he was deluded. Does his death mean that Suki won't die? I suppose so, since it broke his hold over Kurama. I feel so badly for Kurama...with all the pain and confusion he's feeling...and the guilt over the things he said to Hiei...and nearly killing him, too...he's got a lot to cope with. I mean, we know Hiei's already forgiven him, but forgiving one's self is a lot harder. Anyways...look forward to what comes next!

YAY! Yay! Yay! Hittori and Rose are happy together! Thank you so much for ending (well, nearly) the story like that. I thought your Youko Kurama was well written too. Your lemon scenes are hottt! Not too long either, and they fit so well with the story.

Another beautiful chapter not as heart wrenching as the last, Thank God, but still very good. Sad stories and a cold do not mix very well.

I am undecided if I like the fact Hattori ended up with Rose. true he did only want to be with her, but what of the others he killed and tossed of like worthless stones. Death in this case seemed like a reward not punishment. Perhaps I am looking to deep into but it just gives me an empty spot in my heart.

Ok enough with that, hope you enjoy your visit to Va. the weather has been fairly decent for the past few days here.

Once again thank you so much for letting all of us enjoy the workings of you and your muse.
~bows to your greatness~