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for Obligations

by buenagirl

person Sekah
schedule February 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'd like to welcome you back to fanfiction and offer a plea for you to keep writing Yu Yu Hakusho. I've been reading and enjoying your stories for a long time, and it would be a pleasure to see a continuation of Obligations or some newer ones with the same wonderful creativity, and perhaps a more mature style.

Looking forward to a reply (if my email doesn't come through, it's stalkercrow@gmail.com),

Sekah.
person ruthie balboa
schedule January 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
come on!!!!! Write more! Why did you stop when it was just getting good!!!! PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!! PLEASE!!!!
person tala ishter
schedule August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you have to update. i want to see what happens
person tala ishter
schedule July 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is a good fanfic. i hope that you update it soon. i want to see what happends to kurama.
person Anon
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow absolutely love it!!!!! plz plz plz update soon. i really like where this story is going. cant wait il you put up the next chap. plz hurry ciao
person Fuzzy Eared (not signed in)
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Please continue, that was amazing. The social dynamics of the canon's main characters along with those of your own creation has me absolutely on the edge of my seat throughout each chapter! My comments for the first three chapters: 1) "assets" - very cute 2)In the first chapter Kurama was 10. When did he suddenly age 7 years? 3)It sounds like this is aset in a fantasy novel-like world. There are obviously demons, but they aren't the normal demons we are used to seeing - not a bad thing though. 4)There were a few grammatical errors, nothing too detracting from the story, but you once, for example, used "serene" as a verb. 5) "Prescience" = ubercool word. 6)Majari keeps refering to Hiei as "beloved." I suppose that is just Majari being wierd, right? 6)How are the common people dealing with the ruling rivalries between Yama and Karasu? That political situation could be fleshed out a bit better. 7)Please update!
person amber
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really wish you would update soon it;s driving me crazy
person amber
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
When are you going to update? I can't wait to read the next chapter.
person amber
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was great. Please update soon.
person Kayla
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story just keeps getting better and better. I so can not wait for another chapter lol

Please get another chapter out soon!!!!