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for Caught

by RoseandJulie

schedule December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please update soon, i've been waiting for soo long. and i love this story.
schedule April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please update soon, i've been looking forward to the next chpt. please don't tell me u've given up on it.
schedule October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting concept, and a nicely written lemon. ^^
person Bekah
schedule August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, that was halirous! When Hiei first got caught and was ranting about, "But no one, NO ONE captured him into a tiny little ball and lived...." I was pratically crying! And then Misty's name! "Multi-eyes, Go!" I was laughing so hard, my boyfriend came in to ask if I was OK. It's a great story, and the hot lemon secene wasn't to bad neither! *wink*
person myanime91
schedule April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
something about this story really makes me happy. the you pulled the crossover off perfectly. bravo.
schedule April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn this was good I freaking loved this very unusual combination. And Hiei was so cute this was adorable. He he I'm evil for thinking its funny when Staru got eaten. I know you didn't put a second chapter to this but if you ever did it would be very cool. I love that you mention the height difference it helps me picture this in my mind. Love it two thumbs waaaayyyy up!
person Ranma12
schedule March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow... what an unusual crossover. Interesting premise too! Good 4 u 4 making it work, and the lemon was super hot! -=smiles=-
person yukinachan
schedule March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this I'm a big pokemon fan and a big yuyu hakusho fan and I think hiei&misty are sweet together. That was a really great lemon too, but now you need to do one with keiko&kurama since you interrupted thier last one. :) Blessed be!
person Ralina
schedule March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful idea! I really enjoyed it so far. Keep up the good work and I'm looking forward to reading more.

~Ralina~
person Anon
schedule March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
weee please update soon! i like the idea of hiei with misty =]