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I have come back to read your stories over and over again and each time i find something new that i didn't notice before. i like how you have an OC and it doesn't follow the same story line as all of the other OC's out there. keep writing! and i will deffinatly keep coming back to read!

Another great chapter. Are you doing a bit of a crossover with the philosopher's stone? That could be really cool, I love Full Metal Alchemist. That Loki is sure a shady character, but I think that really cares for Bekka, ya know. In a wierd sort of way, LOL. Can't wait to see her perform her next challenge. Should be fun. ^_^

OMG! That was gorgeous!
You know, this is one of my favorites now!
But that was sad... very sad... My poor Kurama! and my poor little bat!

Thank you so much for write the threesome ^^

Oh... Latin, I love that too, I'm dying to learn it!
You are amazing!

The best part of reading if when you are able to feel through the words, when you can read and feel at the same time.
You write very well. Congratulation! ^o^

I am going to miss this story.
Was that really the end? Was so sad .. I was sad too
But was a good one!

Like I said before... I do love this and I'll miss this...

I don't know what more can I say... I do know, but I have a limit in this idiom and I hate that.
Hope to see you soon. Bye ^^ See ya next time

Hi, Here I'm again ^^
I'm glad you are considering adding a threesome... I just love so much Kurama and Kuronue!
And I love your story too ^_~

I am totally in agreement with 'Kogas Hentai Luver'
(or: totally agree with 'KHL' ? .. I don't know if I wrote that well)

Anyway... I'm glad for you and I do love this!

Update! and *cough*write the threesome*cough* Please! O_O
See ya soon! Bye bye ^^

This has been a very intersting story. It took me awhile to finally sit down and read it because I usually never read fics with OC's other characters. They just don't interest me. But you've left such wonderful reviews to my fic that I wanted to check this out, regardless. DAMN! I'M GLAD I DID. I love Bekka and I love Loki and Odon. What great characters. Yoko is hot as hell and I love that you added in Kuronue. Waiting for a lemon between those three, K.^_~ Erm, where in the world did you get so much info on the elements. I mean, shit. Everything Bekka does or learns is so well thought out by you. And talk about explanations of what everything does and means and how the elements all work. I'm so impressed with your creativity that I wish I could run up and glump you for like an hour or so, LOL. Your fic has truly some of the best writing I have ever seen. Yay You!!! Okay, I'll be waiting for chapter 12, K. See ya next time.

Hi again ^^
Now I'm curious about Kuronue...
What about a threesome?

Oh I want to know!
Good chapter! and update soon ^_~

Oh... I love Kuronue!
Good job girl!
I also don't read many of this.. I just enjoy reading things... and writing.
I love when I can read and feel at the same time.

I don't know if you can understand what i am trying to say... because, I'm not good with this idiom.
I'm from Venezuela.

But again Good Job! and Update soon!

Oh... again, good chapter...
Very good really but you need to work more in the details! And more if you are writing lemons ^^
I like very much your story and please... UPDATE SOON! ^_~

Very good chapter ^^ !! please UPDATE SOON!

Very interesting.. I love it! please update soon! ^^ I'm curious, I want to know what will happen next!