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update soon or when u can, but make sure u update

Poor Sango!
Update soon!!!!
Or I will come back to bug you!!!

I love both of these characters, please update soon!

update soon, this is a really tight fic

Hey. I really think you should continue! If you decide that you do, know that I will read each and every chapter you post and try and review as much as I can. It won't be all the time. But I will review. But anyway... yeah Continue this please. Also on FF.Net My username is: Carapheonix.

^_^

~*~ The Dark Huntress Cara ~*~

I really enjoyed your story.. I 'll have to read your other fanfics.

A good story, but not too exciting. I like the Hiei/Sango idea. The only problem was the sapcings, and the HUGE pov markers. Please, DON'T do that! it's annoying and breaks the flow of the sotry. The spacing was too far apart as well (i could live with that, but combined with the pov... no. Otherwise, i wouldn't comment) This isn't a bad story by a long shot. Your grammer/spelling is pretty good, and i didn't see many problems with backrounds, maybe a tad ooc, but not bad. It has the potential to become better, though.
I hope this helped
(and didn't seem like a flame. I hate flammers, but constructive criticism *looks up at review* is okay)

Are you sure that was your first lemon? That was great! I felt like I was there! You should defintly continue this story! I haven't read Sango/Hiei story. This one is really good. Please continue.

continue or i'll burn you! it's a good pairing. strange though, they don't know each other and they jump the gun. that's why you should continue so love will blossom!