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by saiyanb

person Tendrilrake
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*To damn lazy to bother logging in* Damn Kurama's a bad ass- I've never thought of him in this way before... makes one hellofa story! ~_^ Your writting is awesome! And the ending was pure genious! Damn, the thought of all four bishonens together... Koenma better hurry up and send then on that damned private mission soon or I'm gunne send another reveiw begging for a faster update! ^-^ PLEASE UPDATE SOON I LOVE THIS STORY!!!
person Kiyone
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Enter the threesome. Perhaps a foursome soon, with Koenma watching so intently... *Huge smile* Loved the lemon. VERY discriptive, and... well, Kurama being so damn horny made me laugh (i think that THIS is what they didn't show on the anime. I mean, Kurama meek and mild my ass) A couple grammer problems, they've been there ( i just didn't really notice) But nothing to re-edit over, or go nuts about. Just pointing it out (yes, spelling sucks, but i wanna know what..oops, did i say that outloud??) And WOOT! The war returns! (I think people are too lazy to reivew it, so yell at them!Yes, i'm being a hypocrit) Loved the chap! Next... Koenma!
person kit-kit
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i loved this chapter it was so great and hiei being a virgin was priceless. i just can't wait for the three of them to have sex with koenma i wonder if yusuke will have to submit to someone or will it be koenma who submits.
person Altar of Wishes
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I agree with SirPsychoSexy about koorimes being lesbians... actually I came to that conclusion a long time ago. Hey, I enjoyed the lemon and yeah a lot of people are making Kurama a sex fiend, but let's be real here. Kitsunes are either MPD paitients or ravenous fox spirits.
person shiryuu
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yum, this fic is marvelous! Y/K/H is definitly my favorite YYH pairing, so i'm anxiously awaiting the next chapter! :) Great job keeping the characters IC. It's so nice to read a really *good* YYH fic. ^.^
person Deneb-chan
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is an awesome fic and you have caused my long wave of "I don't review fics" to be over. Please update really really soon. I love it soooo much yep yep if only I could write smut this good I would be a menace to society.
person snowball3
schedule February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am glad that you have posted this story here. I found your website a long time ago and read the stories you had there. I never could find it again though so this way I can reread this one. I liked it alot the first time I read it. I hope you will update this soon.
schedule February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHOOOOOO! Very hot, very hot. Do update. Naughty, naughty Kurama.
person Tendrilrake
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn that was hot!!! *Fans herself* Poor Yusuke! mmm... *Licks her lips* I was in need of some good boy lovin' and i got three! no wait- four! when's Koenma getting in the picture? *Grin* you're an absolutly briolliant writter and you must update soon 'cause i'm dying of curiosity here!
eh hem, now if you'll excuse me... *Runs off to the showers.*
person Shaddow
schedule February 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GODDAMN YOU - DON'T YOU DARE STOP - YOU HAD BETTER BLODDY UPDATE - OR I'LL COME AT YOU WITH A HORNY MEAT CLEAVER- damn you - now I'm bloody horny, and you didn't write enough. And Koenma better be watching!!! (maybe he should bed Yusuke while the mark is unheales- just a thought)