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by saiyanb

schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to let you know that I LOVE your stories. I actually did review the Meikai War (I printed that out in sections and read it over a few weeks), it was wonderfully intricate and I do hope you continue. As for "Dreams", although I have not reviewed until now (I know, I deserve 100 lashes!), I find this story to be one of the hottest ones on aff.net. You write an incredibly sensual Kurama and I enjoy your surly yet innocent take on Hiei. And then there's Koenma, who I can't get enough of in teenage form...

I was SO GLAD you added the 3rd part (or 4th if you include the prologue) to this, and it was beyond hot (I almost broke my fan!). I didn't know you had a website or any other stories and I would love to read them. If you get your website back up, or you have them featured somewhere else, please let me know.

You rule!
person Mea
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! You're back! I was really worried. I thought you had given up on fanfiction again. Please put up Koorime Litter soon, it is one of my favorites. Thank You!
Sincerely Mea ^_^
PS- I love your fanfiction!
person Hotaru1421
schedule March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for the next chapter!Please write it fast!E-mail me when you update this story!
person Deneb
schedule March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love you for updating I really do
schedule March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LMAO! Keep the work up! I like this story a lot! Little Hiei.... *giggles* And I like the aggressive Kurama! *dances*

And that's great news to me about the Meikai War!!! Its such a wonderfuly written fanfic! You have an amazing talent! Don't let it go to waste ;)
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwww man! THat was great! YOu defintly do the best sex scenes! I so wished I was a guy at the moment! Man oh man! That was so hot! I have to change my pants before I go to work, now! Man! I can't wait to see what Koenma will do. Oh poor Kuwabara, not getting any action. Well, at least Hiei got some. I bet Kuwabara is still a virgin too. Anyway, excellent chapter and can't wait for the next one. YOU ROCK! UP DATE SOON!
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story was well-written, except I have some points to make:

Why is Kurama always a sex fiend? It could be possible he may be a little awkward with his human body. And also for all we know, Hiei could've had sex previously...

And I don't really find Kinsey 6 Yûsuke to be plausible. Bisexual!Yûsuke, especially after activating his demon genes, but not full-on gay. (That's for members of the Seven hehehe...)

And I'm glad I'm not the only one who thinks the Kôrime are lesbians. ^^

In short: 3.5/5
person Mea
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for the next chapter. I know what's going to happen, but it's fun to read it over again. I was surprised at how many reviews this stroy got. I thought people wouldn't like the idea of all four of them together. Silly me! When my sister read it, she didn't like it too much. Phewy on her, she doesn't know what she's missing. I can't wait for the rest of 'The Meikai War.' I'm just happy that you are going to finish it, and it does have a lot of plot twists,( but that's what makes it interesting. ^_^) I want to recommend a story called 'FoxFire', by Ravenx. I like recommending fics and I wanted to thank you for writing so well. I can't wait for your next update!
Sincerely Mea ^_^
person Mz.Bitz.
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That.
was.
HOTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT.
Virgin Hiei. OOHAHAA. I don't prefer the virgin Hiei but in this fic, it is FINE! haha. Koenma and their "private mission", WHOOHEHE
person KogasHentaiLuver (not signed in)
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just hotter than hell! Threesomes are just too yummy. I loved the way you portrayed their characters as well. I think it was right on target given the situation. Very, very, nicely done.