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for Hikaru no naka e, Into the Light

by Yamiyugikun

person KitsuneDragon
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omg! That was so beautiful! *tear* Great job! Update soon!! 10/10

~KD~
person KitsuneDragon
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWWW!!!!!!! Mega kawaii!!!! This story is awesome!!!! Update soon!!!!!! 10000/10

~KD~
person Yamistar
schedule April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
They're so pretty together! Make them happy, and get those two idiots away from them! My poor Jin and Touya! I can feel a plot bunny gnawing at the authoresse's nerves! I can feel it! ~Ys
person thoth_moon
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The fish-feed sounds romantic... ^__^

Hehe, Toya can be so poetic, whilst Jin can be rather blunt. Two opposites, blended together in harmony... Yes, well, I'll stop right there. This was a good chapter, and I didn't even get confused at all regarding POV's or anything, so good job =) I must say that I am really enjoying this story so far.
person hColleen
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this. You are very good at description and making me remember what all those words mean (I like that :D ). This is the first Jin/Touya story I've read. I like it. :D I look forward to more.
person Kauhri
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please continue. You rarely see JinXTouya pairings and they so go good together their such a cute couple and one of my faves so please continue and keep up the good work. ^^
person thoth_moon
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! An update! ^__^ I was afraid that perhaps this story had been discontinued, but here it is again!

Oh man, how do I describe how much I liked this chapter? It's difficult to do so. I just liked it, a lot.

Though, I may want to point out that I think there were a few points were you used the wrong name while talking about something, as it was the same name as the person who's point of view it was coming from.

Other than that though, very good chapter! I hope I see another one soon!
person Altar of Wishes
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Jin is being so sentimental! I love it!

-_-; Sorry 'bout my fic, I lost my copy... I try to write another Jin¤Touya story though— if I get time 'cause I'm on a tight sched, you know?
person Yamistar
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*cries* Beautiful. You'd better continue this story! Cause if you don't....*sniffles and grabs plushies* You'll make Touya cry....*cries and squeezes life out of plushies* Don't you just love them? *sniffles again* ~Ys
person Kiyone
schedule February 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YipyipYIP! JinxTouya flavour! mmm... yummy... Definatly like the way ya write, shall be waiting eagerly for the next chappi, and.. hmmm... was there anything else? Oh yes, the bloody pairing! *hugs Touya and Jin both* God bless 'em! One too many flamers of this pairing, ignore them, it's well writen. And cute. Can't forget cute. Oh dear... ignore the rant. Please continue!