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for Capturing the Pawn

by ichigokun

person maderine
schedule September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is my favourite story of yours. My perviness aside, your Minoru is spot on, and sexy as hell in a creepy kind of way.
person Suryallee
schedule May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UHUHUPS!!!
Hides herself somewhere else fare behind of here!
Uhh, sorry?
Did not see this one!
Hungs her head in shame
person kohaku Hoshi
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this reminds me a lot of the picture I drew you.

good job~!
person Hotaru1421
schedule March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Are you going to continue this?Please say that you are!!!I quite enjoy this story so far, but I want to see you keep writing it, and make Itsuki be the one to screw Hagiri....Maybe even do a threesome,with Itsuki's ghost hands helping to further the pleasure....Geez, see what happens when I read this story?I start to get naughty thoughts about the characters...please continue this story, I'll be your bestest friend and give you many hugs if you do?
person Hauntingly_looks_like_Hell
schedule March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My god!!!!!! *loves the hotness*
person Hoshi
schedule March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Guess who it is... ^~ Yeah, same Hoshi from RC. How can you invoke "FanGIRL's law" if you're a fanguy? :P just had to ask you that, bye!
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...Oh, the story rocked too.
person Yukyo Kazuma
schedule February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was really good! I like reading your stuff as much as my sister does, but she's the one with the stones to review. I just realized how underated and author you really are. Plus, you're like the second guy fanwriter I've ever heard of too! Btw.... my sister found this cool website on other country and the issue of being gay: http://www.globalgayz.com/

I really like it a lot (in fact I look at it at school ;P ... don't tell anyone!)
person cillaxox
schedule February 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this story! I always thought it would be hot if those two got together.
person Altar of Wishes
schedule February 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm... good lemon. Let's see if it tastes as good as it read... *is feeling the story with her tongue* Mmm! Yummy! SensuiXHagiri is tasty! As always, characterization is 1000/10 with you!