rate_review Reviews

I like it. I've seen a lot of one shots done with this theme. It will be nice to see someone finally expand on it. I hope you add in a past rather than just a future.

One of the good old authors comes back to save AFF from the evolness that is crappy ass writing!!! I thought you'd never come back!! *laughs* But hell, I like the way it's going. Are ya gonna make them fall in love? Or are ya gonna be angsty and like, have one die, and the other be sad that he let such a good opportunity go by! Good, there's so many ways that you can continue this. But hey, whatever you choose, I'll be readin' it. That is, if you make this into a fic...*looks hopeful* Pwease? ~Ys

Yum... I had forgotten what this song sounded like until now. Mmm... that was good, hopefully you wont just leave it at that and have it be hot mindless smut; Id love to read more. There weren’t even any spelling mistakes, truly and wholly a great beginning.
Fav line: The dark haired figure broke the encounter, "Slower, softer." The redhead continued his actions in response, a silent answer.

-kat

I'm enjoying this so far. It's well written, blissfully coherant, and there have not yet been any disgusting breeches of character. Please continue on with this story.

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH I love it I love it!!!!!!!!!! You have got to update soon. Please? This story ROCKS! And who is that song by?

Oooh... songficcy, at first. This is going to get good! The lemon was good, and i shall wait for the next chap! Mwaahaahaa, screw buddies turned more.. or not, depending on Hiei... ah well. Ja ne!