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I'll bring this to your attention, because I've discovered that, to me, this applies to almost every yaoi pairing I've done something with. The short guy, as I prefer, is on bottom. That's kinda why I kept reading this. It's not lime I'll stop if you switch my rule around, but I'm jsut letting you know my honest oppinion...*grins* I always scream at my other yaoi fangirl friends. "The short one is on bottom!!! The short one I say!!" *laughs* I'm pathetic, ne? ~Ys

What do i think? Hmm.... this may take a moment...
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I THINK YOU FRIGGIN ROCK! Does that work? 'We make love', so far the chapters read. I do like you portraying Hiei IN character. Many act like Hiei's an idiot. "Hm, somthing wet on my shoulder where Kurama's eyes are. He must sweat on his forehead!" or after the confession "He loves me, i had no idea!" >.< Pardon my rant. Anywoot, keep at it! I'll review again. (pfft. Like you could get rid of me. Even if you put pretty pink ponies *shudder* in the story, i would still review! ...yes, i would yell, but that's a review, ne?
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Thanx for the update *sweatdropping as she looks at the mumblings/rantings*

i love this fic. It's so true of the two of them. will they ever get it together i wonder?

Um,to say the least this one is TOO SHORT,I should kill you for that,but if you die,who will write this fic,so i decide to forgive you.But please don't make me any heart attack again by the length of your fic.Keep going,I love this fic

YAYYYYY UPDATEEE! This fic is so awesome it draws me in so very well. I almost feel like I need to get off my butt and finish my own fic and post it on here. I am at the last scene of the story, and I have been too damn lazy lately to finish it. Oh well, but I promise I'll get it done if you get another chapter out soon. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!! I don't wanna wait too long now... I love this story and you describe the feelings so well. So again... Please another chapter soon? I'll be good! I'll give ya candy!!! ::Puppy Eyes::

this is so sad but good! i hope that hiei returns kuramas feelings!!!

Woo for procrastination!
(Well, not really. But hey, that's me being a hypocrite)
What does the stuff at the top spell out- don't tell me,
"You must wait".
Foo.
Anyways, still great
(and short.. but whose complaining? I mean, besides me)
I shall be waiting for the next chap!

Weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!! She's back! I thought you'd given up...but then I thought "No, she can't give up," and I kept checkin' at least once a day. Though, usually I'll check everytime I get on. Which, given what day it is, I'll get on about three to four tiems a day....*shrugs* I hate school. It's evol I tell ya! But hey, that's alright that you go slow. Don't feel bad. I do the same thing. Though, long chapters aren't my problem. It's keeping the right tense, and choosing which POV I wanna do....*cries* You must continue!!! ~Ys

I think I really want to read more of this. I only read it because I wanted some Hiei/Kurama yaoi short enough that I could read before I went back to class, and now I'm kinda hooked. So hook me up - update!

You do it good so never worry about your writing because it very good and very passionnate.Ne,minna-san.Update soon,I'll wait for you.Ja ne