rate_review Reviews

Just wanted you to know that I love the story and can't wait till you update

Ohmygod you updated!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD!!!!
I'm actually kind of ashamed to admit this but I come in daily to check if you've updated....(Yes, I'm a stalker)
I can't believe this is going to end soon! Please update ASAP. I'm dying from the suspense!
I actually kind of like it when Kurama and Hiei don't end up together... (whether it be external or internal reasons)
Oh, of course I gripe on it and tear out my hair in frustration but I still enjoy the heartache all the same :D~
(Then I scream, Nooooooooooooooooo!!!!! , and debate whether I really do like sad endings or not)

Anyway, keep up your good work/ can't wait for the ending~!

I hope this is not going to be a fic where one of them dies. There is way to many of those out there. Please don't kill one of them off. It would be too sad. Let them live happy ever after. I know I'm a sucker for fluff. Anyway I can't wait to see what happens as long as it is not one of them dying. Update soon please.

I swear, if you have a character death in this story...I'll scream! Trust me, I'll do it too. But hell, what does it matter to you. That chapter was...kinda weird. It felt like it was just a filler. But that's okay. In a kick ass story like this, fillers are the smae as the main point chapter tot he story! Really. You'd better finish soon! Iw anna know what they do. Just please don't Make Mr. Bishonen Angst Waves aka Kurama kill himself! I don't like the bloak too much (and I'm not English) but don't make him die! Hi-chan would never forgive you! But, considering that fact that he's a fictionalcharacter, it don't really matter. Damn it. ~Ys

Great story so far and can't wait for you to update ( hope soon)
nice way to name the chapters as well

Oy, why does life need to be so difficult? Wouldn't things be easier if we never learned to lie? I'm sorry, my brain's not functioning too well. I look forward to the ending. I do enjoy this story :D

Oh, this story is really getting good! I already added this story to my recommended reading section. Please update!

I love this fanfic. Kurama is SO in character (for once!)
Please keep up the awesome work, I can't bear to see this walk the same path with other too-good-to-be-true (or so I thought) fanfics.

Your complaint about the chapter sounds familiar...I made the same complaint about something I just wrote...that it felt forced and wrong...I was told it wasn't and when I went back and reread it, I saw that it was better than I initially thought...you're just tapped out from writing it. I thought it was very nice...yummy....There are times being a mind reader would be a good thing, no? ;D I look forward to the next chapter :D

Gotta love those toys, ne? But hey, I noticed something kinda off with this chapter too. It was towards the end of the fic. I couldn't quite put my finger on it either. *shurgs* But hey, as long as you can look past it and keep writing, that's just fine. Most of the time, if I feel something wrong in my story, I'll spend days, sometimes weeks, tryin' to get it right. But pelase, don't spend weeks on it! Days is fine, but not weeks! *begs* Please not weeks! ~Ys