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I've never reviewed this? Wow, you've gotta be kidding me! I really, really liked it. It's sweet and has a great ending, not too happy, but not the saddest either, I really appreciate that. Keep up the great work, I hope to see more of your stuff soon!

Nice, I just wish at the end they had gotten together. BUt in not having them do so, you did make the fic a bit more realistic. (reality sucks, don't it?) And if you are the one who made the virign Youko fic, then you have gotten better, that fic seemed the total oppostie of belivibale!

Wow! That was the most amazing fic I've read in a long time. I had tears in my eyes. Your writing is so poetic and emotional. I'm in total awe of you. I usually do not read Hiei/Kurama fics anymore because I've read so, so, so many when I first discovered fanfiction sites with my favorite anime characters. But after awhile the pairing just became very redundant and boring. I mean, how many different senerios can you put two people in. And there are thousands of stories featuring these two. So this is the first Hiei/Kurama fic I've read in a really, really long time. I'm so impressed with what you did here with their characters. It was so touching. Also, I'm a sucker for a happy ending and these two not getting together at the end of this fic was really sad, but you made it work. I hope I'm making some kind of sense. Bottom line is that you are an exceptionally talented writer. I feel honored to have read this. Now I'm off to see what other fics you have for me to read. I bet they're all Hiei/Kurama fic too, LOL.

Awsome fic. I loved it.

OMG, that was a perfect ending!!! I'm not a big fan of "sad" endings, but that one just fit soooooo well with the rest of the story/the general feel of the fic. Bitersweet, and with a possibility that Hiei may grow to love Kurama in return. (after a while.....who knows, ne?) ^___^ Absolutely wonderful -- congrats!!! Oh, and i likes the second song more than the first......it just seemed to flow better in the context of the story, and it mentioned key things like "demon" and "one last hit", etc. Just fyi. ^^ Keep up the good work!!! Bye!!!

Definantly the second one. The words go with the chapter a lot better. It's a wonderful ending to an even better fic.

I think that was lovely, really. I mean, it's not like they really decieved themselves...very nicely written...

*snickers* "We Make Love But Don't Fall In Author's Note" *cracks up* (LMAO) Sorry, sorry, I just couldn't help it!!! ^^ I reeeeeeeally like this story a lot. It's very creative, and a plot line that I think more people should write about. I really like the way you have protrayed Kurama's and Hiei's characters -- very realistic! Oh, and I have enjoyed your writting style, too......... ^___^ Keep up the good work, and update ASAP, k? I can't wait to find out how you end it!!!

I can't believe the next chapter's going to be the end! *sniffles* This is still one of my favorite Kurama/Hiei stories ever! No Hiei acting too sappy, no Kurama acting all rough and tough (which in Youko's case isn't a baad thing). Anywho, I hope this last chapter is a blockbuster! Keep it going! ^_^

I'm awaiting the ending in anticipation. I do love the way you're writing the story, keeping everyone in character nearly perfectly (nearly of course as all fans have different interpretations). The one criticism I have is that is always seems to me as if you never proof read your chapters very carefully. I am constantly finding grammatical errors (mostly in tenses) that would easily be found if you read the chapters aloud.