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April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwwwww
this was a really sweet one, I liked it
thanks for the update
this was a really sweet one, I liked it
thanks for the update
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March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*cries* AHH! Please post, its killing me! T.T I cant wait til the next chapter and its driving me CRAZY! And if you want anyhelp with ideas i would love to help, i also write and love Yu Yu Hakusho, so yah, but just emaile me if you wants.
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March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's very good.... I just wonder when Yoko Kurama is going to swollow his pride to say Okuro is his. Any ways update soon........ Oh I also wonder how Candy will end up.
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March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*cries* I love your story! Please update, if you ever have any writers block i would be happy to help! ^^
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March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was awsome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! it kick total ass
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March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi, it’s me, bowserjr, from ff.net. But that doesn’t really matter, does it? Anyway, to the review….
As soon as I read the first chapter, I was hooked. This is such an original idea. The plot is simply amazing. Nari is such a great character. The things she has gone through was terrible, but very fascinating (to me at least). I even cried at some points.
The best part about it is you used Kouronue (I know I spelt it wrong), Yoko, and Yomi. I find it very hard to find stories containing all 3 of them, and set in their thieving days. You even stayed in character with them, which is just great (although, Kouronue only showed up in the movie, right?).
There aren’t enough words to say how much I love reading this story (all of your stories to be exact). And I love Kouronue (damn it! I have to read it again to get his name right! >.<). I adore your writing skills, and I hope you continue writing these fantastic pieces of art.
As soon as I read the first chapter, I was hooked. This is such an original idea. The plot is simply amazing. Nari is such a great character. The things she has gone through was terrible, but very fascinating (to me at least). I even cried at some points.
The best part about it is you used Kouronue (I know I spelt it wrong), Yoko, and Yomi. I find it very hard to find stories containing all 3 of them, and set in their thieving days. You even stayed in character with them, which is just great (although, Kouronue only showed up in the movie, right?).
There aren’t enough words to say how much I love reading this story (all of your stories to be exact). And I love Kouronue (damn it! I have to read it again to get his name right! >.<). I adore your writing skills, and I hope you continue writing these fantastic pieces of art.
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March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, she might have another baby! Yay! That would be interesting, make it Yomi's, that should make him flip his wig. Please update, I'm hooked.
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March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Keep up the great work, the abuse is a little frightening. But the whole KuronuexNari romance is sweet,
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March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I Luuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuv it !
this is a really well thought out story. i wonder what's gonna happen next! I can't wait till you update again. make it soon please? ^_^
*huggles*
- courtney
this is a really well thought out story. i wonder what's gonna happen next! I can't wait till you update again. make it soon please? ^_^
*huggles*
- courtney
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March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY! MORE MORE MORE! AHH! I love your story, and i love how you get Yomi's personality exactly right, so many people get him....to.....mushy! Yeah! But yes! Please more more more!