rate_review Reviews

Qhen I write a random poem in a reiew made up from the spot, it means I really like your story so UPDATE!

What a great story you have there!
Where else I can find one I don't know where.
On the edge of my seat,
You have to complete,
If you don't,
But then I won't,
Review you review you,
I know you want me to reveiw you,
So update and update and hurry up too.
"Enjoyed that? Don't think so.
Well, UPDATE!! HECK it's just typing!!!!

...wow...your a really great author...ress...wow...well, please update soon.

trisha, I hope you know this isn't the older, much wiser Yomi that we are dealing with. This is the younger, brasher Yomi. Every site that I have run to for information on him and the past clip I have of Yomi back-tracking shows that he was a, and I quote, "..ruthless and brainless fighter who didn't want to listen to the much smarter Kurama.." He also had the traits of a ambitious and impetuous Youkai and he even ignored Yoko Kurama's threat when it came to his raiding without his consent. I am sorry I am making your favorite demon look bad but please understand that that is who he was! =/ I love Yomi too--I am a Yomi fan as well but I am not going to ignore his past nor will I do the same for Yoko Kurama who I love. ^^; But, his past is what makes him so charming for me. =) I hope you understand as do the rest of you. Thanks a Million. ^__^

Ok this was going to bug me till i wrote this. If nari lives and Yomi doesn't kill her or kurama then her unborne child is immortal as we'll thus it cant be killed...Take that kurama. Now i have a bone to pic with you about Yomi, You screwed up his character and made him out to be something he isnt. That bugged me greatly cause i kinda licked him. Hed is smart and trust worthy but in this he has a bad temper and grinks. Kurama i can understand but him thats just plain mean. But I still like the story if not for the fact that nari is a very good character and has endured a lot. I enjoy this fic and cant waite for the next one. Thanks for writing this.

hurry

i love you story =D cant wait for the next chapter

Omigod. UPDATE!!!!!!! YOU HAVE GOT TO UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I want to read more! Here me?! More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I want to know wat haooens too!!! ^__________________^ Love the story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you might get something for updating soon. *smirk* JUST UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Wow...i was just waiting for that...when she would be chosen to become imortal....wow...that was really...wow. The only thing that was kinda messed up, was she took Okuro with her...but....any mother would you know her child with her, but then, that could be your use of showing how scared she really is. And i might have said this before, but in the begining of the story i was like "how could someone forget their own name." But then i relized nari has been so bruitly beeten and gone through so much she has forgotten her own name..it shows how mutch that really effects a person.

yeah nari! go girl! i would have run too! who wants to be around THEM for forever? not me. update again soon pwease.

Yay! And i hope you dont get that what ever you want to call it in your arms...that would be terrible...like once i thought i could possibly have artrites...and im an artist, and it just scared the frekin shit out of me...because i use my hands so much...but yah! I love your story...and i love all your foreshadowing..there is just one thing i have noticed...It seems like Yoko Kurama and Yomi are the only ones that have sex with Nari...it seems Kuroune just kinda takes care of her...