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October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is one of the best yu yu hakusho fanfics i've ever read, great plot, character developement, and just about every other thing is great!!! please update soon i really can't wait to see what happens next!!!! ^^
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September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
there is one thing you got've got wrong in chapter 16, most girls around 5'4 are actually around 95 lbs, i myself is 5'7 and weigh 122 lbs, so being terribly underweight would probably be 65 lbs maybe?
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August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! I have to know what happens next!!!!! How could you cut it off there?!!!!!
*takes a deep breath*
*exhales*
Sorry about that, I just really love your story. Since I did not review every chapter I will ahve to write everything in htis review. First: absolutely LOVED how you incorporated the creation of Kuronue's pendant in the fic. It truly gave us fans a reason, even if it's not real, why he 'sacrificed' his life in order to get it back in the YuYu Hakusho movie 2. I nearly cried at that part of your story because it was so meaningful.
Second: Even though I suspect tha this story is on an alternate timeline from the series, mainly because Yomi is still in the band of theives and still has his vision, I must say, that everything else, especially the timing you created for this alternate timeline flows flawlessly. You have a VERY detailed style of writing and you are extremely talented. You are possibly one of the best writers on this site and i have added you to my recommended readings list.
Third:I love how you stuck to the characters original personalities. The way, or the pace I should say, in which you made Kuronue fall in love with Nari. I also loved how you avoided Mary Sueism and still managed to create a totally believeable love form between Nari and Kuronue.
I could go on forever blowing sunshine up your ass, but, unfortunately I have to depart.
Please update soon, I await your next chapter with much eagerness.
*takes a deep breath*
*exhales*
Sorry about that, I just really love your story. Since I did not review every chapter I will ahve to write everything in htis review. First: absolutely LOVED how you incorporated the creation of Kuronue's pendant in the fic. It truly gave us fans a reason, even if it's not real, why he 'sacrificed' his life in order to get it back in the YuYu Hakusho movie 2. I nearly cried at that part of your story because it was so meaningful.
Second: Even though I suspect tha this story is on an alternate timeline from the series, mainly because Yomi is still in the band of theives and still has his vision, I must say, that everything else, especially the timing you created for this alternate timeline flows flawlessly. You have a VERY detailed style of writing and you are extremely talented. You are possibly one of the best writers on this site and i have added you to my recommended readings list.
Third:I love how you stuck to the characters original personalities. The way, or the pace I should say, in which you made Kuronue fall in love with Nari. I also loved how you avoided Mary Sueism and still managed to create a totally believeable love form between Nari and Kuronue.
I could go on forever blowing sunshine up your ass, but, unfortunately I have to depart.
Please update soon, I await your next chapter with much eagerness.
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August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Who's the best writer on aff? YOU
Who's the best updater on aff? YOU
Hell who's the greatest person in the world?!?!?!? Okay, maybe it's not you, but still. The only reason you aren't is because you left us readers on a cliff-hanger and if I haven't mentioned it before, I don't like cliff-hangers. It keeps us readers attentive, yes, but it makes us fucking annoyed.
Okay, so all in all it was a great chapter and I want you to update like REALLY REALLY soon. Damn this isn' my usual personality so don't freak out, but i can be different (VERY different mind you) in the way I act depending on what I am feeling, and right now I'm agitated and overwhelmed but still pretty happy...Basically, the main point of this review summariesed is;
Great story, update soon.^______________________________________________________________^
Who's the best updater on aff? YOU
Hell who's the greatest person in the world?!?!?!? Okay, maybe it's not you, but still. The only reason you aren't is because you left us readers on a cliff-hanger and if I haven't mentioned it before, I don't like cliff-hangers. It keeps us readers attentive, yes, but it makes us fucking annoyed.
Okay, so all in all it was a great chapter and I want you to update like REALLY REALLY soon. Damn this isn' my usual personality so don't freak out, but i can be different (VERY different mind you) in the way I act depending on what I am feeling, and right now I'm agitated and overwhelmed but still pretty happy...Basically, the main point of this review summariesed is;
Great story, update soon.^______________________________________________________________^
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August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! You updated at last! Saw this first on aff.net so I just decided to review here! It was so sad....is SOMEONE going to break these poor women out and do something about those bastards?! * snarl* * anxiously awaits next chapter* And I'm sorry about the whole internet stalking thing......it seems to me like they don't have the right to do that. And I would have a conniption if I caught someone trying to thieve my fic.....can you say "flame?" *lol*
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August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Intriguing story, can't wait to read more! Well on to chapter two.
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July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow......i cant say much besides that this is just really amazing.....its like your actully there looking at these two and the love that they feel. And its only getting better! >.< Stupid sniper making all this bad stuff happen. But then it wouldnt be as good if he didnt. Just keep writing and let no body stop you!
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July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DUDE! Excellent chapter! Keep writing. Can't wait for the next one.
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July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whooo!!! This....story.....is......AWESOME. I love it. I dead tired though. stayed up 8 hours reading this and it is now 9:22 a.m. Whew. Please email me when you update, please. I think Kuronue is in deep shit! Whoo boy! I gotta see what happens next. Please update. =)
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July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter, as always. But that's not why I'm reviewing. Well, on fanfiction some girl named YokoKohaku copyed your story 'The Worthless Human' word for word. -.-() Yeah, just wanted to inform you of that because I didn't think you'd let someone post it when you have your own name on there and such. I hope things get set straight and such. And update as soon as you can.