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I've loved this story and have been creeping it the WHOLE time you were typing it. (: I lovelovelove it and have searched through shit tons of other stories on this site to find it again and again haha. But yes, it was fabulous, and the pervert in me kind of wishes you had Nari && Kuronue have a reunited sex thanggg. lol but it's still freaking amazing, nonetheless.

Not a big fan of slavery fics, but this one...was an eye-opening, heart racing, well...you get the picture. I was crying, screaming, pulling at my hair, going 'awwwwe'...all that stuff. All I can say or add to that is...Okuro is awesome. Sara was pretty cool. Nari rocks, and Suzu was quite the bitch. OC's are hard to write, but you managed to create four good ones, one was only good at being bad, but most demons are bad anyway. Good Job, and I hope you attempt some softer, fluffier fics too...in order to even out the balance of things and show your love for the characters, of course. Keep on Keeping on. ^-^

I might have gotten to your story towards its end....I just have to said that I really enjoyed reading it....and I can't wait until you write something else....because I know it's going to be a great story too...GOOD LUCK IN ALL FUTURE WRITINGS.......

That's why I love Botan....She understands love.....I can't wait until the last chapter.....Man, I hope it will be one to remember.....

OMG!!!!! What is Kurama going to do to make amend to her???? It will be one nasty scene if he tells hime that he was once Youko Kurama ...I can't wait unitl next time....

>:) Oh man, She's in for it now. :( Hope she gets away, though. :/ *sigh* Love your story by the way. =3

Wow, I have been reading this thing all day! I found you at something like 2 pm and I have been reading until 9 pm! Minus the occasional fastfood break, of course. But wow, I absolutely love this story! The only thing that bothers me, is why does the colouring of Okuro, change from blonde/white, to coal black, every other chapter? lol. But yes, I definitely enjoyed this!

Cool Update update update. your good about not making someone wait to long for an update. i respect that

Hi, I just started reading your story and I hope you will finish it....I really like the way you are tying events together from what happen in the anime and manga.....you're doing a really good job.... I'm a huge Youko Kurama fan and I was a little shocked with his actions in your story....but, then I remember that before he got his human heart he probably was like your story....He was the famous Maki thief after all.....anyway update soon, I can't wait to read more of your story.....I wish this site have the fav. list again I would definitely fav. this story.......

To be honest, at first i wasn't sure i wasn going to read this. Firstly becasue there are so many slave stories out there, and i usually avoid similar storylines! However, your story was so gripping, and despite some spelling mistakes (we all do it, so no worries!), your story is very well written with a fast pace! I couldn't stop reading it! Nari has also grown me, and Okoro- i usually tend not to read stories containing OC's, but Nari is a wonderful creation!
I hope you haven't stopped posting this story- don't let ratings get u down! When i starting posting my fan fictions on media miner (u should post this here, if u haven't already done so!!), my stories weren't getting any reviews- but the more you post, the more reviews you get- and the best story on the net isnt the one with the most reviews!!
If not for your fans, do it for yourself! Work like yours deserves to be shared!
Keep up the brill work!