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for Slip of the Tongue

by cillaxox

schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Here we go once again... *glomps cillaxox*

I love you!

*is currently drooling*

Yay! Kuwa should definately be a good kisser! Especially with all the practice he gets in our fics!

So, I guess I qualify as a repeated reviewer, yay for me! Now I'm just gonna sit around and wait for the next chapter...

*sweat-drops* I'm not actually gonna sit here, I'll go do other stuff... Eh.. you know what I mean! Anyway, 'till next time.
person KogasHentaiLuver (not signed in)
schedule February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like the pace you've set with this story. Allowing Kuwa and Hiei's feelings for each other to develop slowly makes a lot of sense, considering their history together. If they were to just jump into the bed, it would not have been believable. I am glad that we're getting closer to a lemon though ^_~
schedule February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh man that was great! I suspected Kuwabara to be a good kisser, I don't know why, but I always thought he would be. I wonder what Yusuke would say? That would be interesting, since he's the only teamate not getting any action. But then again he might be with Kekio. Oh man Kurama is getting jealous! What is he going to do if he can't have Hiei? Oh poor Kuwabara and poor Hiei! Please update soon I am sooo addicted to this story!
schedule February 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww... Poor Kuwa, rejection sucks.

... They kissed! Yay! Step one is complete!

So... What happens next? *grins* I'll be waiting eagerly for the next chapter.

Later.
schedule February 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! Great details, I'm a detail freak! Anyway, I loved it and I can't wait to read the next chapter! Please update as soon as you can!
person The Empress
schedule February 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice Story. Hope you write more. >:)
person She-wolf
schedule February 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I love the part were Hiei kiss Kazuma. So the next chapter going to be a about Hiei and Kurama? I wonder are you going to make Kurama will jealous right? Please have Kurama jealous! Any way, I like how Hiei dreaming of Kazuma and dosen't know it him. UPdate soon!
schedule February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Of course we like it. Please update this fic soon.
schedule February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! That was great! I think Kuwabara would give someone the feeling of safety and protection. Anyway, please update as soon as you can!
schedule February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! *glomps cillaxox* You're writing another Hiei/Kuwa ficcy! I love you! *glomps again*

Uh.... Anyway....

I liked the beginning so far, especially how you described Kuwa-chan as being all light, warm, and protecting.

I swear, if I ever meet a real life Kuwa I'm gonna grab him and take him back to Kentucky with me, and I don't plan on sharing! *sighs* Why can't more guys be like Kuwa? Tall, strong, honerable, kawaii, and likes cats.

Yeah... I'm done now. ^ ^;