rate_review Reviews

Ah lemon scented chapters.... what am I talking about? That was lemon pie with lemons on top and iced lemonade to go with it! Now to fix Kurama with someone.... Botan?

Ayia, that was great! I so love it! I ready to cry when Kazuma when to apoloaize to Hiei. But I love it and the next chapter better be full of lemon with Hiei taking Kazuma as his mate!

Whoo hoo! Another Chappie. And it is awesome! I loves it. ^_^ Poor Hiei and Kuwabara. I hope Kurama never gets any sleep for the damage he's done. T_T Curse him!!!

OMFG I do not know where you get the idea that you can't write a lemon. I am now going to blow some sunshine up your butt. Do you have any idea how horny I got reading your lemon. You give the best BJ descriptions, damn! Anyway, I can't believe what a jealous shit Kurama is being, but ya know, he is used to getting his way. I can only imagine what is going through his head after being tossed aside for, of all people, Kuwabara. What a blow to the kitsune's ego. I would really like to kick Shizuru's ass for not telling Hiei what really happened, but then if she had, we wouldn't have such an angsty story now would we ^_^ You are truly a fabulous writer. Some of your descriptions border on poetic. I really believe that we think alike, hehehe. Two hentais, go figure. Oh, I love that you've got Kurama doubting his abnoxious and jealous actions. He should feel guilty. Stupid fox. Just for that I'm gonna have Hiei give it to him good! LOL. CYA next time.

Ooooooooooh! Nothing worse then a guilt trip that you give yourself. Good, that's what Kurama gets. I can't wait till Hiei finds out what he did. I hope there will be at least an attempt as stabbing, if not that - Lots and lots of makeup sex between Hiei and Kazuma! *hentai grin* Another nice chapter! Keep em' coming! ~Kenya

Crap! Crap! Crap! Everything was going so well for those two and then Kurama has to go and mess everything up. Damn fox! He better tell Hiei the truth soon or I'll Yusuke to kick his ass!

Yusuke- Why do I have to do it?

DAMN KURAMA! I.JUST.WANT.TO.HURT.HIM.NOW! Now what going to happen in the next chapter? Is Kazuma going to remeber that he loves Hiei and not Yukina? And what about Hiei? He not going to get with the fox now is he? GRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!Hurry with the next chapter!

Ha! Kuwa gets what he deserves for stealing Hiei!

*pokes cillaxox* Talk about successfully screwing up a relationship... Bad Kurama!

*glomps cillaxox* You updated! Yayness! *does happy neko dance*

Now... Will our jealous kitsune be over-run with guilt and confess his part in Kuwabara's change of heart? Or will he continue in his diabolical scheme in taking the Fire Youkai as his own? Find out in the next installment of "Slip of the Tongue".

Now, I have to work on my compare/contrast essay. *grins* I'm writing about YuYu Hakusho and Hunter X Hunter! *skips off to do homework*

OH NOOOOOOO!!!! BAD KURAMA!!! HOW DARE HE DO THAT TO HIEI AND KUWABARA!!! Poor Hiei....poor Kuwabara. I hope that guilt that Kurama is feeling will knock sense back into him!!! Where's Yusuke? He should be somewhere...I would think....anyway, please update this story it ROCKS!!!!