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for Firefly in Pink

by SailorPanda

person Rose-chan
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey Belinda-chan! This was a perfect ending to the fic, especially considering it's HIEI. and my vote is for Kuronue/Keiko/Youko, simply because I am curious what your idea is, hehe. Anyway, can't wait for the ending of Draw in the Rain, I hope it comes soon. Have a wonderful trip when you go! Hope to chat with you soon.

Rose-chan
person Tessa
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I have to agree that Hiei would shy away from emotional entaglements. It's obvious he's got issues in the series. I guess this is one of the most 'realistic' Hiei/Keiko fics I've ever had the pleasure of reading and I cross my fingers hoping that you do add another chapter to this.

Oh, and I want Kuronue and Youko ficcie! There needs to be more fics with those two!
person Tessa
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I have to agree that Hiei would shy away from emotional entaglements. It's obvious he's got issues in the series. I guess this is one of the most 'realistic' Hiei/Keiko fics I've ever had the pleasure of reading and I cross my fingers hoping that you do add another chapter to this.

Oh, and I want Kuronue and Youko ficcie! There needs to be more fics with those two!
person Altar of Wishes
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oops! She did it again! Hiei was really pissied, but I'm glad that they still had sex!
person Alvida
schedule February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not a pairing I would normally think of but you make it believable. I think you have done a great job with Hiei. Now get to the smut!
person Mary M
schedule February 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter! I loved the way that Hiei was just making himself nuts trying to out think Kurama, that sly fox. Keiko was just wonderful in reasoning out everything and getting to the point. The interaction between these two was great! A VERY HOT chapter indeed! Please update this very soon!
person DB
schedule February 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon!
schedule February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
keiko takes the lead. i love it!
person Tessa
schedule February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O_O

Wow. Update soon please.
schedule February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed the conversations that revealed the misconstrued events. Very funny and lovely touch. So many good things in this chapter, I can't name them all. But that end scene was good. I really thought he was going to leave and I was so, so sad but then...well you know. I actually gasped! And went all warm and mushy afterwards. Fitting for the day of love.

Hope you get that lemon up soon!