rate_review Reviews

I liked the story over-all, but just not how you made Kuwabara and Daneil seem so ignorant and stupid. Rated 5 every chapter. Still great that you had such a combination. I personally would like to find a way to combind a grater amount of crossovers into one singular story. Loved your story the way it is. It's different. I liked the happy ending, maybe it could continue with Andrea and Hiei having children. Involving Trunks and Goten with them too. Luck on future endeavors. It might be nice to have a short about Hiei and Andrea having a formal american wedding, but that's just me. I think it would be cool. Chao Butterfly Beauty.

I enjoy how you have a combination of crossovers. It's really great to have a story that's like that. Rate 5. Many times over.

I wrote a review of this story but I'm too afraid that you'll get angry so I left it elsewhere. I'm too afraid to voice my opinion. Anyway, I got halfway through this— this story. Pretty good, could be better— namely the characterization.

Ok I love it! The only thing I didn't like is you over did Kuwabara. He's not that stupid, just ignorant, which is different. Besides that, though, you did a great job in crossing YYH, Yugio, DBGT (I think that was what you were going for) and SG1. That was great and really worked out! I can't wait for the sequel!