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February 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
that was so sad and sweet and well just everything. I loved it. great update
well worth the wait, though I can't wait for the next one.
thanks for the GREAT read, cya
that was so sad and sweet and well just everything. I loved it. great update
well worth the wait, though I can't wait for the next one.
thanks for the GREAT read, cya
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February 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good chapter, it was a bit harder to read due to the spacing. I'm interested in seeing if Kurama is going to have a talk with Yusuke later on or not. SHould be interesting at any rate now that he knows of how badly this has been affecting Keiko even if she was hiding it. Keep up the good work, I look forward to reading more.
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February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really well pulled together. Nice job so far. I look forward to more!
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February 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Read chapter 6........all I can say is This is one GREAT story I can't wait for the next chapter Youko my my someone seem's to be in a hurry Me Well daaa ahh that is ahh Youko My could you be wanting to see an other side of me Me ahh ahh Hey just hurry with then next chapter ok I got to go for now Youko HA HA HA
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February 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GAHHHHHHHHH, why do you freakin have to stop there. bleh
it was so cute
damn i seriously can't wait for the next one. ...man now i have to go to my perspective drawing homework, shit!
it was so cute
damn i seriously can't wait for the next one. ...man now i have to go to my perspective drawing homework, shit!
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February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohh, this is coming along nicely... And now they can feel each other as well....
Ohhh, that would be nice.. hmm.... dreams away...
Ohhh, that would be nice.. hmm.... dreams away...
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February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, I like this chapter just as much as I do the others. Things seem to be heating up between them. About Youko's 'pup' comment, it might be more appropriate to use 'kit' since I believe that's what baby foxes are called. Though I could be wrong about that...
Anyway, I wonder what the Youko's present will be. Readers are curious to find out. =D
Anyway, I wonder what the Youko's present will be. Readers are curious to find out. =D
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February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hm, it's getting highly interesting now 0_0
I wanna read more, so please update soon.
I wanna read more, so please update soon.
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February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
w00t that was a great chapter
can't wait for the next one.
though one question...
"As her hand moved slowly up toward her navel, Kurama managed to reach toward the faucet and turn on the water. A blast of cold water splashed down on them and Youko seemed to hiss in displeasure."
when you used the word Navel, you were talking about her belly button right?
can't wait for the next one.
though one question...
"As her hand moved slowly up toward her navel, Kurama managed to reach toward the faucet and turn on the water. A blast of cold water splashed down on them and Youko seemed to hiss in displeasure."
when you used the word Navel, you were talking about her belly button right?
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February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome chapter, I was wondering if something like that was going to happen. Hehehe can't wait to see what this surprise is Youko is planning. Please update soon!