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for The Hunt

by hColleen

schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very cute. Kinda short, but I guess thats why they call them one shots? Still good for your first.
person MultifacetedTune
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very clever idea, and very "cute" ...for lack of a better word, lol. ^^ Very well written, especially the characterizations and descriptions -- keep up the good work!!!
person mikai
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was great! i doubt i could've wrote a lemon that good(but i don't write lemons, never could).
person verine
schedule May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wa... thats you first fict? Thats to good! Gimme more fic and i must said, i love your fic! That so hot too... ^ _ ^
person Lythande
schedule March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think there was more plot there than you let on. Happiness! Delicious lemon... utterly delicious... ^^
person Hayla Canter (too lazy too log in lol)
schedule February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was sweet and hot at the same time! Great job
person Yamistar
schedule February 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*stares in happiness* Well, I never expected you to put the short one on bottom where he belongs! That was great! I love Hiei uke stories! Follow the Japanese example and put the shorter one on bottom! I hope you write more! ~Ys
person Koorime1905
schedule February 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey very good.Keep going