rate_review Reviews

good job. i'm surprised there aren't more reviews. then again, considering that most of the readers and writers to the site aren't old enough to legally do it in the first place, i doubt they'd appreciate something that actually makes them think when they just want a slam-bam-thank-you-ma'am type story.

not me. the best stories are ones like this. once i got to the end, it made me want to read it all over again so i could see the signs that i'd missed the first time around to how you got to that end. and it all fits. your words play with the readers psyche and i loved it.

and the perfect grammar is a definite bonus too. i hope more people wise up and praise you because you deserve it. definitely.

it's gt8!

Very nice piece work. Considering what I was expecting with a PWP oneshot, this went above and beyond my expections. I just had to come out of my lurkerdom status to tell you how much your talents are appreciated by at least one reader even if others don't give you the credit due to you.

Please, don't ever stop writing.

From an impressed fan,

Jess

OMG! Very hot job. It didn't go the way I expected it to, thinking of something and then having it be something else. You impress me once again because you prove that a lemon doesn't just have to be PWP.

Awesome job!