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for One Last Night

by SailorPanda

person Varon
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful prose. I don't like the KurKei pairing much, but your story has an interesting premise and I love your writing. Too few good writers out there; I'm glad to have run into your fic. ^________^

xoxo,
varon
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http://steadfast-love.tk/
person hidari
schedule August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Who was she marrying in the end? It's gotta be Yusuke, right? But somehow I got the impression it was Kurama.
person Kawaii-Keke-Chan
schedule August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hot- amazingly hot. You captured Kurama's lust perfectly, without turning it into a typical full out screaming porn scene! And Keiko's need is very understandly...who can resisit the red headed kitsune?
person lotismoon
schedule August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome!!! This was very well written! For a minute there i thought she was cheating on Yusuke with Kurama!! Before the wedding!!! Which goes to show that your a very good writer!!! You had me going there!!! Great Job!!!! ^.^
person Unolai
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! ^.^
person Dark Dragon Rose
schedule April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonder what that SnowDrop reviewers was taking about? Obviously she wasn't reading the details closely enough or else she would have known exactly who she wound up with.

That's what you get when most of the readers are young teens reading adult stuff. Sheesh.

Eheh. Anyay I lost track of how many times I've reread this but I like it just as much as the first!
person Ymanetta
schedule February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
At first i thought she was cheating with Kurama but now i see that she was going to marry him the entire time. Man i tell you. You write lovely stories they are so mind stimulating. You have to keep up the great work.
person -SnoWDroPs-SEAL002
schedule February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hrm.... kurama should had taken her... not Yusuke.... bah... stilll good anyway hahah.... yea well keep up the good work ne?
okie well ciao!!

~Snowdrops
person ariacelli
schedule February 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sweet job. the ending was cute.
schedule February 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woot! for some reason the pickles and peanut butter ice cream comment stuck in my mind. how like a parent to embarass you in front of your friends like that. heehee

i'm so glad you wrote something again. really liked this