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Hey, great chapter. I wish you could have may it longer. So this woman is a Kauzma great-grandmother? And her son was very powerful even in her womb? Wow, that one strong kid. So what this have to do with Kazuma-kun? And why did the gosth take Yukina and Shiruzu if they only want Kazuma-kun? Oh, and one more thing. If you could give any new powers to Kazuma what would they be? And if you have a change would you make Kazuma a vampire or a witch?

The journel entry from Kuwabara's mother was a nice touch and really added to the story. I look forward to more.

Isn't that the only way Hiei'll ever do something? Now, I'm inclined to ask about Mr. Kuwabara, you said something about the differences in the way they write... does that mean the Mrs. is all proper and stuff while he's all... slang?

I love this story! I bet once they figure it all out, they'll have more respect for Kuwabara, which he needs! I can't wait to read more, and I think you are doing an excellent job, so far. I would love to read the mangas, but they all have up to book 6, which is the one when Yukina comes in to the story. Anyway, keep up the excellent work and take your time with the story. I know that a good story can only be great when it has great effort put into it.

PS. I like how you made Kuwabara's mom an englishman, that was cool and I liked reading her part out loud with an english accent.

This is a great chapter! I can't wait to read more! Please hurry with the next chapter! I can hardly wait to find out what happens next! :)

I hate when the originalities of the first product are lost. That's why I want to go back in time and stop PJ from gettin ghis hands on LOTRs because he killed Haldir and mischaracterized Gimli! Haldir wasn't at the battle of Helm's Deep!

Oh back to the story... yes, Altar senses many evil things. The attacks were directed at the unborn child that will be Kazuma— and dear god! How many girls in his family? Back to the ghosty-ness... is it because he's stronger than the others?

That just scares me Kazzy-sama. I can't wait to read the next chapter because I'm hoping to find out what exactly Kuwabara drew.

I loved that! Poor Kuwabara, kidnapped again! Please continue. I really like it and want to hear his childhood, or rather what you believe his childhood to be like. Up da

Oi! This is interesting! Specteral rape? Sounds like those nasty old women weren't playing with Kuwa-chan!

This is a very creative idea, and your characterizations(in my opinion) are right on. Keep up the good work, I can't wait to find out what happened to Kuwabara.