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April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, you update. I thought something happen to you. Will I like the new chapter of this fic and the others. But when do the others save Kazuma, Shiruzu, and Yukina? And what going to happen when Kauzma mother gives brith to him?
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April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh I know that one! His name is Yanagisawa Mitsunari (I'm not sure wich way the name goes though...), but eveyone just calls him Yana for short. I can't wait to see what happens next! You should have called it a mystery/horror/suspense.... muwhahaha!
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April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i luv Kuwabara, i really do, and i also luv your story concept... except that i find it on the long side.. T_T
It wasn't until the last sentence of your first chapter that i ever found out that Kuwabara was ever kidnapped! Its just really odd to find all these "men of action" just gathering around an old lady like it was story time. o_O;
Hope your not discouraged as i can't wait until Kazuma tells his point of view on the journal
It wasn't until the last sentence of your first chapter that i ever found out that Kuwabara was ever kidnapped! Its just really odd to find all these "men of action" just gathering around an old lady like it was story time. o_O;
Hope your not discouraged as i can't wait until Kazuma tells his point of view on the journal
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April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Please update soon.
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March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Man poor Bara. Plesae hurry with the next chapter! I can't wait to find out what happens next! :)
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March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story, I'm hooked. Please update soon
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March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. THat was long. I had to copy it to a notepad and read it 'cause the margins were crazy! Um anyway, watch horror movies much? I do believe that Kuwabara and the girls wwere attacked by horrible ghost monsters and he had to unleash his powers...... or maybe he was pushed too far and lost control of himself because of the horrible ghost monsters! Well, whatever, I'll keep reading.
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March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, great chapter. It so sad that the rest of the family get killed and Kazuma and Shizuru only live. And what about the history of the Kuwabara clan, why wouldn't King Enma let Koenma read them? I mean Kazuma and SHizuru are in danger.
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March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh the chills I got from reading that chapter!!! What a childhood! Poor Kuwabara, that would explain a lot. Maybe now they will respect him!!!! I wonder what happened to his family, well I'll find out soon enough, and I am very curious about how Kuwabara and Yoshi (is that her name?) got into the hospitial, before they lived with Genkai. I think that's when the rest of the family must have died. That is awful! Please continue, I love this story sooooo much and it is sooooo good. Please update soon!!!
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February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*blinks*
Dude... Very awesome fic so far! It's given me the creeps! I don't like ghosts! Well, except for Jezebel, she's okay... She was napping in her favorite spot when I saw her. *grins* Anyway, I'll try to remember to check up on this fic. I want to read more of it... I just won't be sitting in the dark like I am now. *sweat-drops*
Dude... Very awesome fic so far! It's given me the creeps! I don't like ghosts! Well, except for Jezebel, she's okay... She was napping in her favorite spot when I saw her. *grins* Anyway, I'll try to remember to check up on this fic. I want to read more of it... I just won't be sitting in the dark like I am now. *sweat-drops*