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OMG just OMG. This is the best story ever, I mean it. I could see this being a moive, totally awesome. Aw Hiei and Yusuke are feeling guilty! I love it! The last line 'Skeletons stripped of all flesh' That's. Just. Wow. It's so compeling and it keeps you on the edge of your seat and... It's just too great for words. I have so many questions that just have to be answered like, Who's this female great evil voice thing? Why did they want Kazuma? And so many more. This is so... Wait, I'm just giving you mindless praise now... Sorry. Please continue, the suspense is killing me! Love ya!

Much love from youe loyal fan
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Katzztar, I've added this to my faves at nfiction and pretty much everywhere else. I nothing more to say except that I love your writing style.... and I will refrain from reading in the dark because of how scared I was.

That was just great...I was like shaking after I read that...and close to tears...I was like ready to cry after reading this...this was sooo awesome I just love this story and I have sooo many questions now, and probably the same ones the guys are thinking, like why did the ghosts seem to be after Kazuma and wanted him dead? Why did those ghosts decide to finally help the group while they were acted, just before the hands were about to kill the new baby? Was Jun really killed or was she taken away? Oh man this story just rocks and I always get goosebumps whenever I read it...please keep up the awesome work and I can't wait for the next chapter! ^^

WOW! I so love this story. It sooo kicks ass. Please get the next chapter out soon. If this isn't on my recomended list I have to say it won't be that way for long.

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Kat

I love this story. It's really great and I'm adding it to my recomended list. Please update soon

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Kat

Wow!! I would have a hard time reading a jounal like that and I've seen alot of bad shit happen to people. Wow. You are an awsome writer and I love this story! I can't wait to read more! Please hurry with the next chapter!! :)

Oh man....I'm never reading that in the dark again.....hahaha I read it last night, but couldn't review cause my mom didn't want me on the computer ^_^; So I couldn't go to sleep for a while ^^; That was soooo awesome thouugh! I loved it! Oh no! Amanada Kuwabara's next?! Oh man...what a horrible childhood! I just love this! Update soon ^_^.

Wow!
as longer I read this, as more details come out.
Pleas continue with this great story!

That was a lot of action. And yeah there were spelling and grammar errors here and there (small ones), but not for the old English (or archaic English). I feel for the Kuwabara family. I really do.

Sorry to tell you, since I am nurse I can tell that a broken bone makes normally a moving impossible. no matter where the breakeing point lies, I personally had a broken clavice(?) hope its the right name, anyway, I could not even move my entire arm.