rate_review Reviews

Hi! I don't know if your still on here or if you'll ever get this but I love this story and I wish you could or would finish it. Whichever the case may be. You're a really good author, and weather you get this or not I had to at least try to let you know.

Man, ya know, you've left this story hanging and I really hope that you will continue it eventually! I've been reading this story for a long time, and i remember when there was only 1 chapter, and I waited forever to read the next one. I have watched so many horror movies and read so many horror/mystery novels, that nothing scares me or freaks me out anymore. I saw this and read it and man, did it freak me out. It gave me chills, especially since I usually ended up reading it at night... at like 1 in the morning... when my family was asleep >.> This is the only thing story that has ever managed to get a reaction out of me, and I would hate to see it die off and never get finished.

I don't know if maybe you forgot about this story, or if maybe you lost your insipiration/interest, but I really do hope that you will pick it up again and continue writing this story. It really is one of the best stories I have ever had the pleasure of reading. So much so that after quite some time has passed since I last read this, I still remember the name of this story as well as your screen name, even though it has been a long time since I last read this.

You have a beautiful writing style and you have the power of captivating readers and then keeping their interest. I sincerely hope that you will one day pick up this story again and continue it, since I will be constantly checking for updates on it, whenever I have free time. So, you still have one fan who'd like to see this story reach a fitting conclusion. I wish you the best of luck and will be waiting for your update.

D.S.

I have never read a fanfic such as this before it is so well made I mean it's perfect it was so exhilarating and exciting for me I just couldn’t stop reading. I was stopped at Ch. eleven so that’s where I started from today, after some threats were issued I gave in and tuned the computer off not wanting to endanger the it. I really didn’t care if it was one thirty something in the morning I wanted to finish but alas it would not be so till today. I voted five for each chapter and can’t wait for what’s to come whatever it may be. Also if I may I wonder about Amanda’s mother could she be some how responsible? Was it she who spoke in the woods? And if so then Why? You are a fantastic writer and look forward to reading more of your stories. As for this one it has enticed me so much I plan to print it out to read whenever wherever I may choose to.

Oh thank you sooo much for updating this!! ^_^. I hope you had a great break from writting ^^. But I'm happy you're back!!! I just love this story!! I have been with it, and your other stories, since the beginning *was formally known as KuwaL* I just LOVE your work and please continue whenever you can!!! ^_^.

Hey.... you should try goiong to the YYH section, then uploading. I think that's how it works now. XD Glad to see you back and all! *glomps*

There is actually another chapter of this I posted at Fanfaction.net. I can't post here for tchnical problems.
I can sign in but it tells me I have no stories! But as you see with this story they are out there but I can't access them!

I love this story so far...Will you be updating soon? Please do

"Run to your mother and your sisters will die. Stay with your sisters and your mother will die. Choose what to do child, in the end you will all die."

Shock and upset? Congrats honey, ya did it. Yikes. I happen to be a pregnant woman and if that last chapter doesn't give me nightmares I don't know what will. Geez, you made a homicidal ghost really creepy with those words above. Sociopathic specters, disembodied hands/paws, hinting at things to come for Kazuma and sister. N/C for the siblings, etc. What, dare I ask, will be in Vol.2 journal? I love the build up of tension, and the gang haven't even crossed paths with the ghosts yet. Keep it up, please. You have a beautiful writing style.

Jesus! That was... nerve wracking. I haven't been on adult fanfiction for a long while, but I am glad that I came back on today. I still remember when this story first started and there was only a few chapters, and wasn't too frightenting. Now, with the whole bloodcloud thing, and the hands... my god! You are definately right to warn people before reading these last few chapters.

On a different note, let me just say, wow. Your writing is phenomenal! Did you ever consider writing horror novels? I am an avid horror movie/novel reader/watcher and nothing I have ever seen or read has even come close to freaking me out as much as this. This story has given me more shivers than anything else. And, no, your writing is fine, and there are honestly not many spelling mistakes, maybe only one or two. This is a pleasure to read, and I sincerely hope that you will update soon.

'Till next time, ja ne!
~D.S.

I want to know, could you tranlate what Jun had been writing? I didn't catch all of it, but I did get that the Irate Monk told her to be careful, right? That's all I got from her passage. I really Like this story and I really, really hope Kazuma and Shizuru Kuwabara will be ok in the end.