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for The Depth of Demon Bonds

by ss_dragon_lady

schedule March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was very cute. I especially liked your two chapters of explanation about demon/reikai personnel sexual preferences. And that was some awful quick thinking on Kurama's part, especially with the oil intoxicating his and Hiei's senses. I guess it's a good thing it wore off when it did, huh? lol. :D As always, I await your next chapter.
person youkaiblood
schedule March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh that was so cute -^_^- it has a perfect ending to!(well for the chapter ^^)
person Heidi
schedule March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful couple of chap. as usual. I can't explain how much I am enjoying the story. There are so many little details that I find here that other stories I have read leave out.
I like the "marking" idea and love how you have used it in your own story. I can't wait till your next update and again, I love your story
person Koorime1905
schedule March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm so sorry,I had many tests this week so I can't review your fic earlier.YOU WHAT?NOT JUST YET....Don't make me scare,I hate Yomi enought to kill you,why don't Kuronue,I like him much than Yomi.Hey,you wrote about love so well,guess you will be a famous romantic novel writer in the future.keep going.Ja
person Mea
schedule March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another funny chapter. I am going to Corpus Christi today, and am coming back on Sunday. I hope you update by then.
Sincerely Mea ^_^
person Lady Aqualyne (Too Lazy To Sign In)
schedule March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAYYYYYYY!!!! I really liked this chapter, and I can't wait to see what happens when the rest of the team finds out not to mention the Makai!!!! I enjoy your stories immensely and I am glad you liked my review and I am glad I was able to pick up what you wanted us to see in the story. You rock and I can't wait for the next chapter. Update SOON!!!!
person youkaiblood
schedule March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
its amazing how often you update!
this chapter was very good, the characters were kept as they normally are(cant remember the word^^)
person Lady Aqualyne (Too Lazy To Sign In )
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAYAYYYYYY I think you did exceptional on this chapter especially showing the close minded views of many humans when it comes to bi sexual, gay, and lesbian relationships. I like that you added that in there, and it made a lot of sense to. I think you did a exceptional job I really do. This chapter was well written, well explained, and I just love the different views and the arguments for the understanding of those particular relationships especially since not many people actually make it to where a few of Team Urameshi acts... yanno... actually human and against the idea of homosexual relationships. ::nods:: I think it makes a lot of sense since many Humans are very closeminded about that type of thing and feel that only female/male relationships work. I also liked that you put that "Humans talk so easy about true love... but they do not know it" and I like that you had Botan say it. It is a very true statement... we as humans do not understand true love, we lable love but sware it is true love then down people for having true love with their same sex. We are very contradictory people and I like that you added that into your story. Job well done my dear and I hope to see you update soon.
person Heidi
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That chap. was just wonderful. Too bad that more people could not learn to be more open minded about those type things. I liked to questions that the "humans" asked. It made sense
and was very "in character" I really liked how you explained different feelings and the differences in demon world vs. human world. Love where you are taking the story and the interaction
between hiei and kurama
person Mea
schedule March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked that chapter. It was funny. Is Botan gonna spill the beans? I hope not. I also liked how you explained gay couples in the Reiki and the Makai. True love is being able to except them for who they are, not their gender. I hope you update soon!
Sincerely Mea ^_^