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for The Depth of Demon Bonds

by ss_dragon_lady

person Mea
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mea: That was so sweet! I hope they live! ::Mea's sister hit's her over the head:: sister: Of course they're going to live! The story would suck if they died! Mea: Well it's her story, she can make them die if she wants to! As long as they die together and live happily ev- :: Mea's sister pulls the keyboard away from Mea:: sister: If they die, I'm gonna- :: Mea knocks her sister out with a bat:: Mea thinking 'I knew I shouldn't have let her review this story with me' Mea: Sorry about that. She gets a little crazy when she reads stories like this ^_^'. Anyway, it was a great chapter and I hope you Update Soon!
Sincerely Mea ^_^
PS from Mea's sister- They had better live, or- ::gets hit with a tranquilizer dart:: sister: Ah Shit!::faints x_x::
Mea: That's what you get for threatening my friend!
person comicfancat
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow what a chapter,what a way for Hiei to come to terms with his feelings for Kurama
and I thought you'd have at least Yusuke know or figure out what was going on between
them. Update soon please
person Heidi
schedule March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeeeaaaahhh! Another wonderful chapter and the rate at which you are updating is amazing. I hate to think about what Kurama's bad feeling is about but I knew something was going to happen. Everything was going way to good. I can't wait to see if everyone else figures it out. Kuw. might have kittens over it but Yus. seems to be ok with whatever is thown his way. Again, this is such a great story. Can't wait till you update again.
person comicfancat
schedule March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yomi's coming I would guess and that can't be good.Isn't it time that Yusuke know about them though(if only him for now)
so he can be there for Kurama and Hiei.Not that he wouldn't be but surprises would be bad in the middle of a battle with
Yomi.Update soon please.
person Mea
schedule March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a great chapter! I never really saw that much stuff when I review a story. I found this new site called www.eastofsanity.com/. It had one really funny Halloween doujishi on it. It's a Hiei/Kurama doujinshi, even though at first it may not seem like it. Go to the YuYuHakusho section of the "Fan" Doujinshi. It's called Halloween, by Blackdragon. It's very funny. I better go before I start rambling, Update Soon!
Sincerely Mea ^_^
person youkaiblood
schedule March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so cute ^^!!!! yusuke figured it out! good boy *pats him on head*

the cinnomin(sp?) rolls made the story extra sexy ^_~
person Dark Rose Damael
schedule March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOO! what are you planning? well it can't be good can it? a little angst perhaps? i love angst! i hope there is some, your an wonderful writer! i wish i could get my stories half as long as yours!
person Ry
schedule March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is so yummeh! And very well written, not under descriptive, nor annoyingly describing every cell of the skin! I like...I like very much! I'll keep checking back for an update, such nice lemons and fluff are hard to find...*nodnod* So please add the next chappu as soon as you can! <3
schedule March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, that is some kinky oil...I like. I love reading this. I looked a little while ago, and when I looked today, there were more chapters! Yay! I really love how they are bending to grow closer to each other. I also can't wait until the others find out about them. Well, I can wait, because I want to read all the good stuff that leads up to that. But that doesn't mean I can wait *patiently*. Great story, much deeper than 'they met, they snogged, they slept together, the end'. Not a suggestion, merely a comment: I hope Hiei learns how to bend. That would be the ultimate trust for him. At any rate, keep up the great work, I look forward to more.
person Koorime1905
schedule March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey,in which chapter you will put your lemon,tell us please.This chap is surely good,but why you didn't allowed Yusuke to know about this,I think he is kind of clumsy but he still a sensitive person,so there's nothing to worry about.anyway, I know that you had come up tha idea so I'm better not interfere so much.Keep this up