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for The Depth of Demon Bonds

by ss_dragon_lady

person Koorime1905
schedule March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hic hic,you scared me too much,I'm going to die when I read your fic,but it's very good anyway.Why don't you use the word "Kuroryuha"for Hiei's dragon.Anh I'm supposed in the next chap,Yusuke will know about Kurama and Hiei.But you said that Yusuke will understand,so I don't have anything to worry about,THANK GODS.In the recent lemon,you used the thing very kinky,I don't know how to slip just one finger in that very very small hole in the...you know.Can you explain that to me,I has read and couldn't understand it.Mata ne!
person Heidi
schedule March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
As always this was just the best. I can't wait until you update and see what all Kurama and Hiei talk about. I also can't wait to see more of Kuwa. reaction about Hiei and Yukina, and Hiei and Kurama. Poor guy.
person Mea
schedule March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yesterday was the most horrible day of my life! My grandma was selling Easter baskets and I had to help her all day long! Coming home and finding that your story was updated really brightened up my day. Thank You! Update Soon!
Sincerely Mea ^_^
PS- I was so tired yesterday that I didn't review.
person youkaiblood
schedule March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YES!!! they are awake and alive!!! i was so into the story that when it ended i was making sure that i wasnt dreaming! i was like where is the rest of the story DDDDDD:
person comicfancat
schedule March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cool chapter,it'll be nice to see the 3 getting closer after going through
everything they have together. Yusuke,Kurama and Hiei make a great friend
ring of sorts.
person Ry
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww...that's so sweet in a very non-sappy way! It takes skill to write like that!
person blu_dragon
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow i must say that chpt was intense. great chpt. i love the story. sorry ihavent been reviewing every chpt but i am a faithful reader just cant review like i would like :( sorry. ne ways pls update soon. i cant wait to see what happens. i hope they dont die but if they do at least they'll be together.
person Heidi
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omg!!! I swear this is the best story ever. I loved this chapter. You really know the characters. The fight scene was ok but the inner torment(Hiei) was beyond anything that I have ever read in a fanfic before. I don't know what your plans past this story are but it would be a waste not to stay with writing. You have a great talent. Again, I love the story and it is such a pleasure to read your writing.
person youkaiblood
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
thats was so sweet yet drepressing and i still loved it. i dont know if i missed this but where did yomi go?
person bellashade
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was an extremly sweet ending of the chapter - can't wait for the next one :) pleeeeeeeeeeeeeese don't let them die pretty pleeeeease with blueberrys on top.
are we going to see koenma an the oter's reaction when they realise/get told kurama and hiei mated soon?